Reviews for Prince of the Pokemon Awakens
Guest chapter 11 . 5/19
the yokai lover rikuo chapter 11 . 5/14
Epic ! Just pure epic! Keep going ! I love it and I'm sure lots of others do to!
Sharp121shooter chapter 11 . 5/13
This is a good story you should at a few mor chapters
Guest chapter 11 . 5/2
Will Ash have a girl in this story? If so, then who is the lucky lady? Hope we see more soon.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/29
i'm even more pissed at THEM now because i read what he just said please add me into the story THEY are going to PAY for what THEY did to ash he is the nicest person ever for crying outloud please add me into the story so i can punish THEM with my pokemon please
Guest chapter 4 . 4/29
ash even though you're not real except in this story and others and video games if i was in the story with you i would be your loyal friend to the end because what THEY did to you THEY'RE lucky i'm not in the story because this might suprise you but i'm kinda like you i will not accept people hurting pokemon like PAUL does and this will also surprise you but on my pokemon team my strongest are a garchomp,dialga,palkia,giratina and several others including legendaries and yes i am nice to them ash and if the author will let me i want to be in the story with you and join your in whatever you need help with and on your journey because what THEY did is unnacceptable and if i had been in the story at the time they did that to you they probably would have found themselves in the distortion world with no way out whatsoever so author if you will please add me into the story so i can help ash with this and you have my word on the honor of arceus,sir Arron and everyone else with ash i will NEVER batray him not like they did i wish to be a permanent friend to him so please add me into the story Mr. Author sir my real name is brandon but i would like my name to be Vengance For what i will do for ash if he wishes it because i mean every word i have said.
lovefanfiction120 chapter 11 . 4/29
Oho! Interesting ! Quite an original plot, "prince of pokemon". I would love to see the next character , so please update as soon as you can
DarkBlur2005 chapter 11 . 4/22
Update. Update, Update, Update, UPDATE! Update this story, you magnificent bastard!
Smitty chapter 11 . 3/31
I have to admit, I was really having trouble liking the story, until the 11th chapter, just because of grammar mistakes. It is a great story and I love to read it, just so long as the grammar stays like it is in the 11th chapter. But still, amazing story, love it!
juanymendez1980 chapter 11 . 3/21
Awesome story! Keep writing, cause i can't wait to read it!
Guest chapter 11 . 3/16
It's a great story and I can't wait to read the next chapter
WRITEMORE chapter 11 . 3/13
Guest chapter 11 . 3/1
Ash cannot ignore all of humanity. I know he trusts his real parents, but not all people are evil towards their Pokemon, with the exception of The Deceptionists( referring to Brock and bad company), Ash's ex friends. Including his adoptive mother. Anyways, Ash should not break contact with other humans. Prof. Oak is better. Ash could make new friends in Unova. Speaking of which, you could add Cilan and Iris into the picture, eventually, at the right time. If Ash trains to be the best, then he and his faithful companions must put their A-Game at all costs, to protect one another, and to defeat all adversaries. I am waiting for the update for chapter 12. Post it as fast as possible. Do not ignore this review. I speak for all readers when I send this to you, darkjumper. We are waiting for chapter 12, which I believe will be promising.
RogerPokemon chapter 11 . 2/28
This is very good story..Chosen one's prophecy...
DarknessOfMine chapter 11 . 2/8
Hopefully this will be back in business soon! Want to read more! Love Lucario Of Darkess xxx
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