Reviews for A Crack in the Mask
DeathsDragon chapter 4 . 7/26/2014
_ nice, nicely done and well written. I like it. :) Its very much like these two to, so stubborn and yet so nervous of doing something wrong _
XxSHSLFangirlxX chapter 4 . 4/24/2013
...Well, this was different. But I really liked it. I'm impressed by the way you worked in the concept of 'masks'. This is easily one of the best DouWata fics I've read, though I was cringing with embarrassment for Watanuki as soon as I knew what he was going to do (but that's probably a good thing - it means you did a great job). Anyway, like I said, I really enjoyed this!
Emily chapter 4 . 11/29/2012
GAHHHHHH NBJFDIHFILSZHFSLHUIIHFRUIEAR HILFHIFISNH FINSH!
wordsmithie chapter 4 . 11/19/2012
I love it! Not only is it completely hot - the tension between the two was so palpable as I read it - but I loved the concept of masks that you've incorporated so well into this story. I think the mask thing is evident in canon as well, and it works so perfectly here. Thanks - I really enjoyed reading this.
chocolatebunnies chapter 4 . 8/17/2012
Maybe I'm missing the point, but I don't see this as "PWP, pretty much," as you said in chapter 1. I mean, it is rather sexy (a lovely guilty pleasure to read some parts :D), but I also really liked your characterization of Doumeki here. The embarrassment (what is wrong with me I just typed that word 5 times before I spelled it correctly) and unsureness, but determination underlying it, that he showed when finally confessing to Watanuki seemed, to me, very in-character. I don't think he likes to show his emotions because they make him feel vulnerable/naked, and the way he finally dragged them to his surface for Watanuki was well-done.
I found it interesting that he has two Watanukis in his head, the fantasy-one and the real one. I wonder how his perception of watanuki will change after all this?
Damn all those mask-related quotes were cool; imma write them down now :3
Guest chapter 4 . 7/16/2012
This was outstanding. I find the fact that they share an eye incredibly sexy, and I love when it is used as a keystone in building their relationship. I like it that you utilized it in a steamy way even more so
This story had me on that butterflies-in-my-stomach high all the way through. Thank you so much.
Oh man the eye thing... so hawt.
SpiritedObsession chapter 4 . 6/23/2012
/ OMG. you really have a knack to write the utterly embarrassing stuff don't you. /

but...THAT ROCKED! / i really think you should continue...**
James Birdsong chapter 4 . 5/12/2012
Awesome two chapters.
James Birdsong chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
Cool two chapters _