|Reviews for Charmed Alternate|
| CharmedAddict11 chapter 30 . 10/26/2013
this story is so great. I just found it and read the entire thing. Keep up the good work. I hope you can update soon :)
| Barbarossa Rotbart chapter 27 . 9/29/2013
I really doubt that the series creator had planned for the Charmed Ones to have male offsprings. Remember the Episode "Morality Bites".
| Barbarossa Rotbart chapter 19 . 9/28/2013
Sorry, but I really doubt that Paige's shield can do the same thing as Prue's telekinesis. It's a shield and not a giant shovel.
BTW in an eralier chapter you've got the age differences of the sisters wrong. Piper is three yaers yonger than Prue, Phoebe five and Paige seven.
| RealmOfPossibility chapter 30 . 7/14/2013
Yay. You're back! I will always take 'late' over 'never,' especially for a great story!
| lizardmomma chapter 30 . 7/10/2013
great job, I can't believe Leo was a suspect
| ladybugsmomma chapter 30 . 7/7/2013
You better update quicker! Keep up the great work!
| Sara Wolfe chapter 30 . 7/7/2013
I love Paige being the sensible one
| Laby Anne Boleyn chapter 30 . 7/7/2013
Really nice chapter.
| Jocasta Silver chapter 30 . 7/7/2013
Great, now Prue is real trouble now.
| Laby Anne Boleyn chapter 29 . 6/30/2013
This is a really good story, one of the best I've read with all four sisters. Hope to see more!
| WyaRose chapter 28 . 4/18/2013
Hope all is okay with your husband! Miss this story 3
| Beppo1 chapter 29 . 4/12/2013
Hi I hope your Inspiration will come back.
I love this storry
| Marcus S. Lazarus chapter 29 . 3/3/2013
The writing style felt a bit rough in places- some of your sentences felt a bit too fast to really convey the emotions being explored in them at first-, but the central plot was still interesting, I assure you.
The idea of the Halliwells meeting Paige without knowing how she is sounded simple but intriguing from the beginning, to say nothing of your first meeting providing an excellent set of circumstances to allow Piper and Paige to bond even with Prue still alive, and subsequent developments have been very interesting so far, to say the least.
Their discovery of Paige being a witch as well is introduced in a very natural manner without giving the Halliwells any reason to speculate that they’re actually related to her, and her new powers- with Prue still alive and hence no need for Paige to inherit her abilities- work out equally well.
Your use of original ‘cases’ mixed in with the pre-existing episode storylines was very well-handled- your plot with Loki was particularly good, although I admit that was partly because of the ‘Avengers’ or ‘Supernatural’ fan in me (More for the reference than the implication in the first case- I prefer Loki as the bad guy in ‘Avengers’-, but definitely for the implication in the second case)-, changing enough details to accommodate Paige while retaining the key essence of the original storylines, ranging from her being the target of the ‘dream doctor’ to the gradual development of the Halliwells’ bond with Paige.
She might still only be regarded as their ‘adopted’ ally, but there’s still a very interesting bond being developed between the four of them even without the knowledge of their biological connection; I DEFINITELY look forward to seeing what happens when you finally reveal Paige’s relationship with the others.
Hope you’re going to continue this story soon; it is FAR too interesting to remain as it is…
| A fan chapter 28 . 2/3/2013
You should really update this soon before i explode into 100 little pieces. In my head, what i am saying is said in a hush, calm tone.
| Guest chapter 29 . 12/4/2012
loved it more soon please