Reviews for Broken
tapperbell chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Hi! This was a brilliant piece! It was very good! However, there are many spelling issues (like didn't, for example. You spelled it as "din't") and the ending seemed abrut. Other than that it was a wonderful piece! Good job! :)
sophie9874 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Hi! This was brilliant! Great job! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! You have a gift!