| Reviews for Avatar of Victory |
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   TheEleventhDoctorDab chapter 4 . 7/30 Aww. Rest in peace, Wuffles. |
| TheEleventhDoctorDab chapter 2 . 7/29 What was the four-letter word? |
| TheEleventhDoctorDab chapter 85 . 7/18 I've probably already said this, but every time I reread this story... it just gets better and better. |
| TheEleventhDoctorDab chapter 74 . 7/16 Huh, Phoenix mechs are based on Sonny... Of course they are. Which, I guess means they're based on the I Robot mechs as well. |
| TheEleventhDoctorDab chapter 39 . 6/30 "A list which began with Kaiden Alenko." Wow, FUCK Jenkins, then. |
| TheEleventhDoctorDab chapter 33 . 6/27 "despite that chisel in her brain [...] present tense" Wait, that doesn't make sense. I know it's meant to be a reference to the Rannochian Quarians, but Adahn literally just referred to Tali as "Creator Tali". |
| TheEleventhDoctorDab chapter 28 . 6/25 Oh, wait, his name's Harrison. Nevermind. |
| TheEleventhDoctorDab chapter 28 . 6/25 An annoying murderous scumbag called Felix? Is that a Red vs Blue reference? |
| Joey245 chapter 85 . 6/24 Man, I've spent the last few months almost obsessively reading this story, and I loved just about every word of it! The way that Avatar lore was almost seamlessly integrated into the Mass Effect universe, the revelations about the Protheans and the Reapers, the way that background aspects of both franchises are fleshed out and made to be meaningful...it's an incredible work, and I'm glad you found the will to finish it in the end. Thank you for writing this, and keep being awesome! |
| TheEleventhDoctorDab chapter 11 . 6/16 It's weird how you put hyphens exactly where they aren't supposed to be. Side-arm? No. Shepard Commander? Also no. |
| KyliaQuilor chapter 14 . 4/9 I love that Legion keeps getting sniped :rofl: |
| Joey245 chapter 18 . 3/8 Probably my favorite chapter of the story thus far! A happy(ish) resolution for they Graysons (Gillian is my favorite Mass Effect side character, and Jun here captures her energy perfectly), emotional catharsis with Tali Shepard, and we finally get payoff for Shepard and Liara's UST! Overall, a very emotionally heavy chapter, but that's what makes it awesome. Very glad I found this fic, looking forward to the rest! |
| valkrus chapter 58 . 3/5 so that's it that's how Grunt died? |
| valkrus chapter 34 . 3/1 Aww I kinda like Bau sad to see he became the Tela Vasir in this |
| valkrus chapter 26 . 2/18 ok your asari naming sense sucks. They're aliens so their names are supposed to be equally alien-sounding. Nobody is going to believe there are Asari named Annette van Trugh or Vlad whatever-the-hell-that-is unless they have a human as one of the parents |