|Reviews for Haunted|
| crazyemeralddragons chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Another great story, although this one made me want to cry. Poor Tear... It's and interesting view on what could have happened if Luke hadn't come back. There's just one thing that I don't quite get. How did Tear become afflicted by neural contamination? She's a Seventh Fonist, so Lorelei shouldn't have affected her like that. The only reason Mohs lost it was because he was incapable of using the Seventh Fonon. Otherwise, in-game, Van would have gone completely insane from having Lorelei inside his body.
| RubyMoonz chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Now you're just being really mean to Tear, aren't you? Which is what you love to do because she is your favorite character. I totally understand that feel.
Anyway, this was a really good read. Why haven't more people reviewed it? I really felt for Tear in this one and poor Chase! I was kind of raising my eyebrows when I saw the whole nine to seven year thing but when you explained it, I understood it better.
Great story and I hope to see more of Chase!