You drag fights on way too long, and as a reader, I become disinterested and skip most of it so that I can find the outcome.

This is kinda weird. I could have sworn I saw this chapter before... Did you edit this?

..wow..ur story is amazingly lengthy lol. Nothing against it! In fact, I love it! Update moree!

Naruto could've at least kissed her forehead to show her he cared for her or something.

But how great is that RWBY Soundtrack?

RWBY reference... I am officially a very happy otaku right now.

I had to go to those meetings to

I am loving this

Once again you have managed to create another mind blowing chapter that has surpassed expectations. In addition you really know you're stuff when it comes to medicine and the human anatomy and the way you applied it in this chapter with Natsu's surgery , Kushina's pregnancy and Naruto and Erza's birth was incredible Also it seems Wendy has chosen to go with Naruto, I will admit that I am sad that she won't be with the Fairy Tail guild, but I am even more excited to see how her decision will affect the plot of your story. I am also curious as to what was in the cylinder sent by the king to Minato and Kushina.

Now for the most important part of this chapter was Naruto's interaction with Erza. In my opinion the best part of the whole chapter and what's more you also revealed their origin story as well, which by the way was very impressive. You got their reactions and attitudes exactly as they should be. There are not many plot holes and everything seems to fit together, the only thing that confuses me is Rin. Was she aware of Erza's identity when she arrived at the guild?

You really caught me by surprise with they are actually twins thing, I was not expecting that. It seems that Erza will be working a little harder to surpass her brother and it also seems that Naruto has confidence in her abilities.I am eager to see how this will affect Erza's growth as a character. I am even more excited of how she will tell her guild her origins, I can already imagine their reactions. :)

Job well done on yet another bad ass chapter and I eagerly await the next one where Wendy arrives at their new home and I am looking forward to more of Naruto and Ultear's interactions.

loved this chapter

Fan fiction at it's finest!

What did Naruto mean when he said his blood runs through Erza's veins.

what about the info about acnologia being a human before hand andetc

wait, so Uzumaki is an important family name? (got from her mentioning she's an Uzumaki, so it seems like the family is important)

why is Naruto having the last name Namikaze them? shouldn't it be Uzumaki? If Minato wasn't a wizard saint then he'd have just been a normal mage (minus the strength)... in Fairytail if Lucy married that one fatass her dad wanted her to marry, she was also supposed to have given birth to a Heartifillia heir because of her families importance as well as his...

Namikaze shouldn't be an important family so Kushina, Naruto, & Erza shouldn't have the last name Namikaze & if Namikaze was an important name, then one of the kids would be Uzumaki while the other is Namikaze... not freakin Uzumaki-Namikaze... not both...

and finally, we get to the parts with Ultear, only took a few years :P

can't wait for more and interesting chapter over all

can't wait for another chapter