I loved it so much! That ending was so like him! Like, seriously!

Lots of love,
me

Lol this story made me laugh so much. I loved it.. *wipes a tear from under my eye from laughing so hard* I really liked the way it ened.

That is soo cute

"Then there's plenty of room for me to go if you don't take the calendar, right?"

One of the most epic lines in InuYasha fanfiction history.

great plot!

aw!

you are a really talented writer, and i liked how you managed to add the humor into such a fluffly situation.

and, have inuyasha screw it up but get it right at the same time.

Aw...very sweet. I leave my criticisms aside, I think I've said enough already. That definitely explains why he didn't rip Hojo to shreds outright, I thought it was a little weird that he was being so nice to her knowing she'd instigated a kiss with someone else...Just wait for him to figure out that she really did kiss Hojo rather than butt heads with him...Hehehehe...yes I'm a sadist, I know it, but this was more cute than funny so I had to add a bit for myself- not that the cuteness was bad, I adore fluff. And fluffy this was! He must have been tired to finally get the words out right...

I'm feeling bad about saying this, but did your pinky have spasms while you typed this? Do the squiggly red lines underneath errors mean nothing to you? Because the number of periods strewn through innocently uncompleted clauses is quite shameful to behold. I understood it, but my grammar/punctuation/spelling/typo nazi self is having to breathe into a paper bag right now...

Wow that came out mean, I'm sorry...Yeah, I guess you're probably thinking that if I really thought that was mean I'd erase it, but you do need proofreading on this and I can't think of a kinder way to express myself. I'm rather brutal in my honesty, aren't I? Maybe horrifically tactless is a better way of putting it...

As for the ideas, and the creative and rhetorical elements, this was hilarious and well done. I loved the little play, and Inuyasha's anxieties and plots were very entertaining. I can't wait to see how his 'goodnight kiss' comes out...

Oh Inuyasha...He really should have just asked Souta or Mrs. Higurashi for advice before he started trying to feed her worms...And I apologize again, but this has to be done for the sake of my sanity: "He had know idea why she wanted to eat worms,..."

Shutting up about that now...*prays that you don't hate me forever*

Your version was much funnier though. He is so ridiculous, but we (the fandom) love him for it. Very cute, and very amusing.

Nice set up, the repercussions of her little slip are going to be endlessly amusing, I can already tell. Nice job with building up the anticipation!

Oh good god she's evil. Pure evil. Pity he figured out a way around her little plan, but his seething jealousy was quite amusing for the moments it lasted. The cackle that came after almost made up for it, and the suggestions made by his own mind more than made up for the loss of my sadistic pleasure at his jealousy. Now my sadism has switched to Kagome...Hehehe this is going to be good...

Hehehehehe I'm all a-quiver in anticipation of just what he's got planned next- if it's half as funny as the image of him lying prone in a bathroom stall in a woman's bathroom no less with his foot stuck in the toilet-! yeah I probably will die laughing...Again though, I feel guilty saying it, but please proof-read. When entire words are just plain missing it makes it a lot harder to figure out what was meant to be said- I have an idea, but hey, I don't know do I? Know that I'm enjoying your writing, I just wish I could understand it all of the time- wouldn't that make me enjoy it all the more?

A pity they're not going out for Mexican or Thai or something spicy. That added level of insanity from Inuyasha being scared of spicy food would be so great...I am such a sadist, aren't I? Oh well, how else will I get my amusement? Nice job, just wishing you'd fix the typos...I'm sorry but they're really bugging me if I don't get confused by them outright. Don't get me wrong, this is well-written and hilarious as heck, but I just wish I didn't have to reread lines because of errors within them...Still very curious and willing to find out what happens next though!

hehehehe goodness this has such comedic potential...I wonder if Inuyasha will be able to hold himself back if Hojo does try to make a move...His indecisiveness will probably kill me with laughter...As if his smugness hadn't already...Although, when he sees her slap Hojo for trying to kiss her (just a hypothesis, nothing more *whistles and twiddles thumbs innocently*) I don't think Inuyasha will be holding her up to the whole "What you do with him, you have to do with me too!" thing...Just a hunch, although he really shouldn't worry about it.