|Reviews for The Lost Son|
| General Ripper chapter 27 . 1/14
Great story but I think Ahsoka would be 16 not 13, in the first season she was 14.
| Ishaan Madhok chapter 1 . 1/1
I loved the fanfic but I have one question. If Anakin was taken by the sith at age 9 what was the result of the invasion of Naboo without him
| Vi-Violence chapter 27 . 12/9/2013
This is good, but it could use some polishing, several of the later chapters are lower quality work than the rest.
| Pokemon Trainer Josiah chapter 8 . 9/12/2013
and there was a vat of mava underneath in the mile high hole it was a reactor so he'd burn up
| Pokemon Trainer Josiah chapter 4 . 9/12/2013
darth Krayt aka a shared hett
| R. L. Ravenclaw chapter 6 . 8/16/2013
It's a good plot and a nice idea, but the dialogue could use some work. Everyone kinda talks like teenagers which is weird for the older folk. Also, keep a close eye on punctuation. A period can slip between the cracks here or there. Also, descriptions of the characters surroundings can really add some body to the story and give the reader a clearer picture in their mind.
Not trying to be mean or anything. These are just helpful tips for writing.
| corey.prevost98 chapter 27 . 5/22/2013
That was a really great story
| Anakinskywalkergo chapter 8 . 4/5/2013
This is one of the best fanfics EVER! I love it!
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/30/2013
there was lava at the bottem to
| dahellraider chapter 27 . 11/18/2012
I know this story is done and all, but I just thought I leave my review. I enjoyed this story a lot. The first half more than the second in my opinion. Great and all, and I'm sure you have improved since, but for the love of god nodding in silence seemed to be the story's annoying theme. Spice it up next time, using different forms of acknowledgement. All and all good job.
| Lady Goddess Lexie chapter 13 . 10/1/2012
Hey, for some reason the wrong chapter 13 seems to be loaded. I am unsure if it is just my web browser or the site, but all the same just a heads up
| wolverine627 chapter 27 . 9/22/2012
i loved this story
| Tiva-McAbby-Densi-Neric-4ever chapter 27 . 9/22/2012
Wow. I just spent the past 6 days reading this fanfic and I must say that out of all the multi-chapter fanfics that I have read (star wars and other categories) that this is one of the most amazing fanfics ever! I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed reading this fanfic. This is a fanfic that I will most likely read again (and for me if I read it more than once it must be amazing, because I'm very picky about the stories that I read.) I would like to tell you how muxch I loved this fanfic but I can't come up with the words to describe how much I love it. All I can say is awesome, wonderful, and amazing job writing this fanfic; I love it!
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/15/2012
I like this story. Totally funny and awesome. More! Maybe have Anakin and Padme become grandparents. Have Luke & Mara marry and Han & Leia marry. Bring Chewie and Lando into the story as well.
| falcongal chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
Let me guess the mellenium falcon