Reviews for Some Things Aren't Funny |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome. My love for this grow stronger |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! But one thing's wrong with it. You said Tony threw up without realizing it, but in the next chapter, there's no mention of him throwing up. Just thought you should know. Other than that, I love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was cringing up until Tony went in the water since I had an idea of what would happen. But there was Clint to the rescue! With his super sneaky ninja-vent skills haha :) Great writing, I was on the edge of my seat. LavS |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow spectacular ending :) I am so glad you kept on going with the story and wrung out every whumpy goodness there was to be found and the ending perfect, lighthearted. I love how hard it was for them to get there and how clint got in, I honestly feel like you thought of everything thanks for sharing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow that was just amazing, honestly I sat and reread the last bit more then once and I am sure you have gotten tons of reviews, but I just adored it, was a great idea for a short story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful! I really liked how you wrote the characters and angry!protective!Bruce was a big bonus for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great! I just watched the movie recently, and that was my first introduction to all the characters, not being one to read the comic books and having not watched the previous movies (though now I'm going to have to go get the two Iron Man movies :) Your story was well in keeping with the movie characterizations and was very well done! I think you had the relationships between them just right and the dialogue was quite in keeping with the characters. I found this story through PeechTao's Lithium Hawkeye, and I'm so glad they pointed me here! thanks for sharing, and I hope you have more movie-verse Avengers stories in mind! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well written, very believable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I absolutely love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Poor Tony! & Poor Clint. I Mean Clint Must Have Felt So Bad For Doing That To Tony... But He Didn't Know. But Now Everyone Knows About Afghanistan. & Wow, I'm Surprised That Bruce Didn't Hulk Out... He Was Close Though. & I Loved How Clint Went Though The Air Ducts... But If I Was Going To Secure A Room I Would Definitely Make The Air Ducts Only Like A Foot Tall & 6 Inches Wide... At The Most. Probably 6x6. XD Really Like This Fic. X3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Poor Tony! I Feel So Bad For Him. Having Such A Flashback In Front Of His Friends. How Horrifying. & Clint Must Feel Totally Horrible For Making Tony Have The Flashback. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, this was really great. I absolutely love it. You need to write more like these. Wonderful job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Epically cute! This was way too awesome for words! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked Bruce almost becoming the Hulk. Tony I think is the first one that's ever accepted the Hulk and not tired to find ways for Bruce to get ride of it. It makes sense why they're so close and why the Hulk is so protective of Tony. If I was big and angry and for the first time someone liked and trusted me... I'd be danm protective! Nice job with Clint, I could really feel that dred of oh shit I really screwed up and likewise I could feel Tony's horror and embaressment. This was well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Love how well you keep everyone in character, can't wait to read more! |