Reviews for Through the Fire
Rose-Aki chapter 18 . 6/11/2014
It was well written and very sweet. I loved it :)
gloomy maiko lover chapter 18 . 1/16/2013
-Happy New Year to you and everyone! and I really liked this kind of sad the story is over though it's still a great chapter you did a really good,great,awsome job. loved this,loved the sweet Maikoness smirks alittle so,just really liked this you did a great job.
Private Fire chapter 18 . 1/16/2013
And exhale! We have closure!

Suspenseful to be sure. I love the way they worked together as friends do. They support each other and help each other.

I love the Maiko bits in this.

Sorry to see the story end but it was satisfying.

I hope when you have time, you will spin us another tale.
Alabaster86 chapter 18 . 1/16/2013
Good conclusion though I don't think a blade would rebound like that and have enough velocity and force behind it
to hurt anyone. But that's a small quibble and I'm sure I've got things in my stories that defy logic as well.

You've got some nice descriptions here and that makes the chapter more vibrant.

Anyway, good job, Doritos. I'm sure we'll hear more from you soon.

masterX chapter 17 . 1/4/2013
masterX chapter 16 . 1/4/2013
you only did one thing wrong, by telling us that your story will end before the finale battel, YOU NEVER SAY THAT TO US!
masterX chapter 17 . 1/3/2013
please update, i really like your fic
MaikoLover30 chapter 16 . 1/1/2013
Amazing! You're an incredible writter! I really enjoy your story! Good Job...
masterX chapter 17 . 12/29/2012
pleas don't be bad at updating on this, i really like your story hear
cladness chapter 15 . 12/28/2012
i L.O.V.E the ending, so cute
boundbyspirit chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
Amazing chapter. Loved it. Though I do personally think Mai wasn't very much IC, you did a great job regardless. :) The writing is extremely well written-to put it more accurately: fabulously written. :D
boundbyspirit chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
amazing chapter! Loved it. Oh my Maiko feels...3 your writing is brilliant btw ;)
Guest chapter 16 . 11/18/2012
I like your story! It's adorable!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2012
Mai! Noooo Zuko comes to the rescue
Guest chapter 4 . 11/15/2012
This is so cute! Just check over your spelling ;)
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