|Reviews for Unquestionable Love: The Prequel|
| NephilimEQ chapter 27 . 5/27
"This is madness!" "Most of my ideas are." LOL! BEST. DUMBLEDORE. LINE. EVER!
| NephilimEQ chapter 13 . 5/27
I love the shared cigarette scene in this chapter! I, personally, detest cigarettes, but I remember a guy at university who used to smoke menthols around the corner of the dorm building at the same time every day and whenever I went to class, I couldn't help but inhale. It *can* be calming, and I love how you showed how it connected the two of them. Love these two to pieces, and I love your writing! You capture details so effortlessly and easily slip them into the story without disrupting the flow of it. Can't wait to read the next few chapters. :)
| observer chapter 70 . 5/22
you know, i find writers on ffn whose work is criticized, esp. by other writers, that it usually has to do with jealousy. why else would they seek to tear down another writer?
i think its clear why a reviewer below might have sought to belittle you, crmediagal - because you and your stories are excellent. i hope you continue to prove this person and others that you're a cut above the rest. never stop writing. the fandom needs writers like you. :)
| thatperfectsomeone chapter 14 . 5/15
so I can't recall if I read this story yet but I really like it. and never feel like you have to defend something you put in your stories after all they are YOUR stories and people are free to read or not read them. your very talented and I'm glad you were recommended to me.
| Hikorichan chapter 70 . 4/27
Wow, that was a doozy! I especially enjoyed the first third or so; I was totally hooked and in love up until Severus went in the hospital, when I felt the tone changed. It was so sad for a while there! I found Hermione a bit of a nag after the hospital and thought Severus might have become a little less insecure after so long. Their conversations too seemed to repeat a lot up until the discussion about children. I'll be honest: I HATE how Hermione says "I love you more"; I understand it's supposed to be sweet, but I find it insulting. Imagine having the amount of your love belittled every time you try to express it; maybe that's why Severus remained so insecure despite everything else. Anyway, despite my personal interpretations of things, the writing was great throughout. You definitely have some talent, but my heart still goes with the original UL over this one! Thanks for sharing both though :)
| BlueWater5 chapter 70 . 4/12
Great story! Nicely crafted and well-written.
| BlueWater5 chapter 65 . 4/12
Enjoyed the commemoration ceremony.
| BlueWater5 chapter 50 . 4/10
Well written trial.
| BlueWater5 chapter 44 . 4/10
| T.L. Wilson chapter 10 . 1/30
I always wondered why Snape never remove his worst memories, the way Dumbledore did with the pensieve...because in theory, wouldn't that take away the nightmares? I guess that was his own form of punishment to himself.
| em chapter 70 . 1/26
this is the second time I've read this and I don't regret it at all. you've created a lovely universe. thank you.
| Guest chapter 70 . 1/11
some of your nasty readers have some serious issues. if they don't like it, they shouldn't be reading it. and it's obvious they're jealous in some capacity, so just keep doing what you're doing. you wouldn't get a reaction out of them if you weren't that good. and you are.
| avidprof chapter 39 . 1/11
I really like this story, and am looking forward to where it is going but severus and hermoine's terrible explanation of where she was is terrible and stupid. Why didn't she just say that she was captured by snatchers. Tortured. Heard belatrix mention a cup in her vault and went to steal it before bella moved It? Would explain everything perfectly and Severus would know that the best lies are those that stick closest to the truth. I hate that you are protraying hermoine as stupid by not having a decent excuse.
I hope this doesn't offend you as I love this story but I am seriously annoyed by this, Hermoine is a planner she would never go back to the boys without a valid story and severus should have said how he stole the cup so hermoine's explanation of that process. Was believable. My small rant is over sorry. Like I said I am really enjoying this story.
| Chloe chapter 70 . 1/10
Ever since the decline in fanfic quality, I have edged away from . However this story makes me very very glad that I returned. I read UL about a year ago when I finally got too curious about HP (yes, I've never read the books nor watched the movies! Sue me.) and decided to read up a bit on the universe of HP. Quickly I identified with both Severus and Hermoine and for a very weird reason I started to ship them together. Awfully weird, but hey Anyways, I quickly went on a hunt for fanfiction with this pairing and found UL. And my gosh I was so blown away and it made me fall harder for this pairing
A year later, I was bored and decided to revisit your story - because why not? I thought after a year of not touching UL, I would have forgotten at great chunk of what had happened inside. But I was sooooo wrong. I could still vividly remember the chapters and I quickly felt a desire to read more of your work. And I found this! This is such a gem! I ravished in every word and when I reached chapter 60, I started to read it especially slow. It took me two days to finish one chapter. I was just so reluctant to see this end! Your chapters are breathtakingly beautiful. Each word has a purpose in your sentence and every vocab is used to hone the overall picture of the story. The character developments was awesome, the transition was so smooth. As an author, you inspire me greatly. I look up to you so much and my god, you are a wonderful author.
I don't even know if you would read my work, but if you do I would be so honoured. I don't have an account here — unfortunately. Hahaha. And I have no idea how I can contact you without looking like a stalker. So until I find a way... I do not know what to do. HAHAHAHA. I love your stories, and boy do I love you too! Thank you for writing this story and being a ball of awesomeness! You rock! 3
| WickedlySweetSilence chapter 70 . 12/27/2014