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I loved this so much! The story was perfect. Your writing is amazing. Definitely my number one SS/HG fanfic. ️

Omggggg. Screaming ugh I want Ron to go away already

SO GOOD OMG I AM A PUDDLE OF GOO THAT WAS SO DAMN AMAZING

If a teacher punched a kid in the nose at my school, he or she would have been fired. Unless it was in self defense it still would have been questioned and the teacher would have been probably suspended.

Thank you so much for this wonderful story. This was a lot of work, that is for sure. But you just bring us into their world, and their situations, and their hearts so believably. I love your descriptions and the funny dialogues that are different between each of the characters. It makes me want to figure out a way to hang out with them in the HP dimension.
Don't ever stop writing. In a way, JK Rowling left us all such a huge gift in more ways than one. Not only do we have her master storytelling, and her fantastic characters, but her characters inspire wonderful writers like you to take on the mantle to flesh them out even more.
I will be so sad when our enigmatic, complicated, big-hearted Professor isn't in stories like this. You have given him a loving, loyal, and passionate wife, and now and darling family of girls. Girls!
Please let me know when you will be writing any other Snape stories. I love them, especially yours.
Sincerely, Melanie

Ooooh! What a love story. This chapter made me cry with joy for these two. They have been through so much, too much. Her young energy is medicine for him, and his brilliance is awesome in her eyes. Poor guy. I'm glad he finally got this done. This is beautiful. You made my day with this chapter. Thank you.

Yay Mom and Dad! They come around. Love is a powerful thing.
There was a moment in previous chapters that I wanted to commend you on. It is good that you brought to light that Dumbledore wasn't perfect either. When they kept repeating the phrase he used "...for the greater good." That is the motto he had with Grindelwald, as you know, in his younger years. He was searching for power just as much as Snape was searching for protection when he was younger. Both Dumbledore and Snape made dark decisions when they were younger and both lost someone they loved dearly as a consequence. I can't help but wonder if that is why Dumbledore gave Snape a second chance and put him in the Order. Just like James and Lily trusting Peter Pettigrew to be their secret keeper...that eventually killed them and left Harry an orphan.
You are so good at getting into the mythology and keeping the deeply complex characters still enigmatic and ambiguous. But then showing the nature of each character. I especially love the little repartées between Severus and Hermione. They have their own communication that really works for them and it's clever, funny, snarky, and romantic. Thank you for writing this.
I don't know who in the world would want to flame you on this platform. There are a lot of real kooks in this world. They are on the news every day. Please don't ever stop writing. I'll read whatever you write. I promise. Melanie Jackson-Cracchiolo

Oh my goodness. This isn't smut and neither were the previous chapters. This is passionate lovemaking. It's SO romantic. And it is so welcome after all the sexual tension of the past chapters. I wish I had portraits that talked sense into me like the ones in the headmaster's office. Thank you for letting us get a glimpse into the innocent purity of these characters, hidden as it may be.

OK. Now I have really fallen for him. Snape is a jazz fan...and a jazz vocal fan. Great taste too. When I met my husband, he made a tape for me of some of the best Billie Holiday. She sang always so laid back. Like Count Basie's Big Band, based on the blues from Kansas City. Always just behind the beat, and focused on the lyrics too. I love her. If you like movies with her songs, there was an award-winning movie made of her life called "Lady Sings The Blues" with Diana Ross. It was made in the '70s. Billy Holiday was one of the most pioneering singers who paved the way for so many other great singers. She had a very tough life due to racism, drugs, and the effects of the nightlife lifestyle. She also had a terrible childhood.

I hope Hermione was good in psychology or psycho-social healing. She is taking on quite the project now. She is so perceptive, and yet still so inexperienced to the horrors Snape has gone through. But she is compassionate and empathic. It's like they are sticking their toes in the water to see if it is safe enough to get in...and they don't really know they are doing it. He has let her in more than just about anyone already. I hope she has the sense to know and respect that. He needs her more than he knows. The physical and sexual tension is building too. They are starting to appreciate each other's hidden charisma. Great tension. Love it.

I wish I could see a picture of the smoking scene. adorable

I loved this story, but I disagree that you have to read the first installment before the prequel. I think you could read the prequel first and it wouldn't ruin anything. Loved them both!