Reviews for Hermione Granger is Stupid
Vegasman chapter 10 . 9/12/2017
Now that's the Hermione we know and Love
Vegasman chapter 9 . 9/12/2017
Ron is an idiot,who never sees what Harry has gone through. He thinks he should have it all and not pay for anything. I hope Hermione can get through to him this time. I sincerely doubt it though!
Vegasman chapter 8 . 9/12/2017
But she still hasn't told Harry
Vegasman chapter 5 . 9/11/2017
Just The fact you are in love with Harry and you didn't need to read it from a book
Vegasman chapter 4 . 9/11/2017
When she gets home and talks to her parents she should honestly see it
Vegasman chapter 3 . 9/11/2017
Hermione has to get a new book "how to get your Wizard"!
stefanie1955 chapter 16 . 9/6/2017
I am glad he did not let her. She is clearly scared and it was most definitely not the right time.
stefanie1955 chapter 14 . 9/6/2017
*Fan girl scream*! Omg! What was J.K Rowling thinking!? The woman is absolutely brilliant, but how didn't she see Harry and Hermione are perfect for each other. This is so sweet, and I really see it happen 3
stefanie1955 chapter 12 . 9/6/2017
Omg! This is the sweetest chapter yet _
stefanie1955 chapter 11 . 9/6/2017
Can they go to the room of requirement for a date? It could transform into a restaurant I suppose.
stefanie1955 chapter 7 . 9/6/2017
Omg! Parvaru and Lanvender are right.
stefanie1955 chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
I like this. Do not get me wrong. I think Ron is a good friend, he can be very thoughtless at times, but he matures. However, I never really saw chemistry between Hermione and him. It just did not make sense. Sibling love? Sure. They fought like siblings. Now, her and Harry? There was something there. Harry was truly her best friend, she truly did love him, and vice-versa. That type of friendship, that's the foundation for love.
I always did think that Ron would have been excellent with Fleur. I know, I know, Bill married her. Was there a need for that? nope!
Rowling is brilliant, one of the best writers of this century. But romance? Nope, she could not write it. not to mentioned, she actually said in an interview that in hindsight, pairing Hermione and Ron was perhaps not what she should have done.
reaper1901 chapter 14 . 8/4/2017
well that was funny with luna being a commentator
old-crow chapter 19 . 6/30/2017
Hi,

Your closing chapter was a delight to read. I was fearing that your Luna would be having a hard time w/o Harry and Hermione. Your version was inspired.

All the best,

Old-Crow
old-crow chapter 16 . 6/29/2017
Hi,

I confess to being conflicted here. You went 14 chapters, effectively ignoring the wider world beyond who is smooching with who, then in a chapter and a half, more-or-less caught up with the last portion of book six.

If you wanted to limit the book to who is smooching with who, why not just go AU and ignore the outside doings? That would have been fine and made an excellent story.

On the other hand, if you wanted to include the greater world, why ignore it for 14 chapters? I accept that the story has largely been told from Hermione's PoV, The suspicious behavior from Ferret was all but ignored, as was the war. If you wanted to go that way, you Hermione should have been much more aware of what Harry was up to and given their relationship, would have insisted on being included. Ideally, she would have made an impact and DD would still be living.

Unless I completely missed it, there was no mention of the ring curse. I think you may have missed a perfect opportunity at inspired storytelling.

Old-Crow
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