This was lovely! Thanks for sharing!

I like your Lavender. She's cool and smart. Thanks for sharing!

Wow...what a phenomenal rewrite of HBP! That too featuring Hermione as the main character! I enjoyed the way you portrayed the titular character, Harry, Ron, Lavender, and Luna the amongst all the characters you've shown in your fic (and you've shown a lot)! The entire journey showcased drama, romance, comedy, action and just pure goodness! I didn't like how JKR wrote HBP, but you've made me a fan of your writing; if only JKR had taken her cues from you then perhaps I wouldn't have stopped liking Hermione as a character post-OoTP...

Anyway, Hermione Granger certainly isn't stupid any longer by the end of your fic; she's finally got her captain in her arms, right where he belongs! ;-)

P.S. Your Harry seems so suave and dashing (unlike his bumbling canon counterpart)! But you know what? I love love love your portrayal of Harry! I definitely wouldn't mind being his lady :-D

omg. I love this perspective. lav doesn't get a lot of time in fanfic and is pretty much neglected but this was an awesome start

Ha! :) Love that you managed to squeeze Hitchhikers' Guide to the Galaxy into the story! Thanks for the lovely angst too.

Wonderful story! Thanks for giving me a great read.

Great story , i really liked it.

gryffindor courage gryffindor chicken ,haha .. laughed so hard at this one .. nice job

Awwwww...

"Everything is brilliant." Nice romantic storry. However... Well, no however. Thanks for nice reading.

hermoine did not ask ron to the party, and hermoine was the one being a jealous bitch, all ron did was date a girl,

the problem was it was all hormone fault and none ron, hormone attack ron with birds that was a very bad thing she did, I would never forgive her for that, it was also a crime, two she stop talking to him, she walk away form there friendship, she was again in the wrong.

people say ron was a git but he was not, all ron did was date a girl that was it, he had no idea that hermonie like him and if you remember that he did not know she like him, you should be blameing her not him because he did nothing wrong.

ps she also a bitch, lavender told her she going to date ron, and break up with him and instead of telling ron so he could guard his heart she keep that a secret, sorry but she was a bad friend.

they did not have a date for slughorn party, she never really ask him, she stop talking to him, ron was great with harry, in book 6 ron and harry hung out all the time,

and ron was the one that call her smart and pretty all the time not harry, sorry but hormone is to blame for this not ron,

Amazing fic. Great read

I think I've invested too much into Hermione's shoes right now because, damn, I feel emotionally exhausted right now.

Whoa, I wasn't expecting this at all.