Reviews for Beautiful Tears
DrarryTLA chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
That was really cute even I don't particularly favor Merlin being on top. :) It was well written and enjoyable. Thank you. :)
GreenHaven89 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
While I did find this story wonderfully well written, I found it a bit disconcerting that Merlin is so willing to harm himself physically just to please Arthur. Even more so that Arthur wasn't more upset when he discovered what happened.

But, anyway, that's just my opinion.

Thanks and good luck with your writing!

Chad
SK-fan7 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
o.O wow
Merthur Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Oh...

Oh...

*wipes tears* Oh my...

... That was actually so... amazing.

When I first saw the title - I loved the instant atmosphere that the summary brought to mind but... that was just phenomenal. You so talentedly described Merlin inner yearning - his unconditional love and his undying devotion that at times I physically couldn't breathe. You balanced it so well with the lengths and actions that he would go through for Arthur. It wasn't just talk. Merlin felt a physical and soulful bond to Arthur. And then the affection that was displayed by Arthur - how he loved to see Merlin want and need to do this for him - the heated, lustful, erotic actions were underlined with such a tender and intimate heartbeat - how they looked into each other's eyes and all the other wanted was to melt with the other and be reassured that they pleased them...

I am sincerely sorry that this review wasn't longer. After exams and friend troubles... to be then caught off guard by this overwhelming and emotional story... I'm a little speechless right now.

Tell me if you wish it to be longer.

Thanks For Sharing :)
BlooMist chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
This is ridiculously, insanely beautiful. I have no words for the writing, and having Merlin bleeding to turn his skin fair as Arthur had wished was, in my point of view, one of the biggest love proofs he could have given him (as most people, I believe, would tell him to sod off). And I wholeheartedly agree. Merlin crying is one beautiful image. In general this piece of writing was a small piece of art. Thank you for sharing it.

Bloo
Oh Moneypenny chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
This was really well done. Incredibly sweet - which I didn't expect because of Arthur at the start. And I adore the expression "kissed by the sun." Thank you for writing, it's gorgeous.
lavishone chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Though well written (as always) I don't think I like this Arthur very much. Wanting tears feel cruel to me...
mycrookedsmile chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
hnnnng. I love this Posy. I haven't gotten up to the crying episode yet, but I'm sure Colin is just lovely crying.
Hisuiko chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Beautifully written. I love the need to serve shown through the bloodletting, and the final kiss to his heart.

Great writing!

Hugs

Hissy
Colin James chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Great story! Update? xx
floating fog chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Beautiful... There is no other way to describe it...
isacz chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
that was awesome. I really liked it.
Tlcatlady chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
That was a beautiful moment :) TLC
TheOriginalKateMonster chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
This was so astonishingly beautiful to read, almost artistic. A lot of it reminded me of the kind of things Geisha had to do to please people.

I really want to read something written by you that's dark and heart wrenchingly bitter-sweet involving Merlin and Arthur!

In short, love the way you write and love this fic!

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