|Reviews for Naruto:Sinister Eyes|
| Mighty Pen 20 chapter 6 . 7/21
You know, I was going to say something about the innumerable mistakes in your story, but then I encountered this name misspelled:
Hahahaha! Here's you being funny without even trying to. xD
| Grim chapter 10 . 7/20
That was lame when is he going to stop holding back!?
| God of Fighters chapter 1 . 6/6
not shushin its shunshin
| TheColorlessKing chapter 15 . 5/31
This is a really good fan fiction with only minor errors or things that bother me but that's just me you did a really great job on this story and I can't wait for the next chap
You did a good job on the punctuation, clearness of the text, and being very descriptive ;) the only thing I was really bothered by was the spelling and the age difference which I'm coping with by imagining he's 17-18 if I can think of anything else I'll make sure to let you know and I hope I don't come off as pushy like I said really good fic
| TheColorlessKing chapter 6 . 5/31
I don't mean to step on your creative rights or anything and I understand that this is fictional but don't you think 12 or 10 years old is to young to be doing lemons like you could have made him 15 or 14 as the minimum it just doesn't make sense to me that a 12 year old already has a need for sex even though he hasn't hit puberty I'm assuming
| Maelstrom of the Nine chapter 15 . 4/12
I definitely feel that you could have some NTR scenes in this. Personally I strongly dislike those, but can they do wonders for a plot line. On another note, sad to see this gone and abandoned and I hope you can find the inspiration to pick it back up!
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/8
Cool please write more
| Mars the avenger chapter 6 . 4/5
This is one of the most awesomely written story that I have possibly ever read.
Good Job, excellent chapter.
Do update soon :D
| DarkCasanova chapter 15 . 3/24
Great story just sad it ended before it could take off
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/6/2014
| NARUHAREM FOREVA chapter 15 . 8/26/2014
so where have you been?
| xXRythianXx chapter 4 . 7/19/2014
I give your story a 9.5 out of 10 because of the originality to your story, you didn't turn Naruto into an person that just wants to kill every thing you made him into best kind of dark character the one that has a mask that they use in public to have people think them an idiot, but in reality they are master minds that have a slightly sadistic side that only comes out when in a private setting its this kind of character in these types of storys that keep me coming back for more, keep up the amazing story and don't let any one tell a dame things wrong with it, this is your story you make the way you want it not the way they want it.
| Darth Renatus chapter 15 . 7/2/2014
It seems that for all his cunning and intelligence Naruto still has some growing up to do. Nice chapter and a great story. Hope Anko gets better.
| voidblade6 chapter 15 . 5/27/2014
Did you die? If so sucks to be you if not you should probably continue becaause its a damn good story.
| RossoSchneider chapter 15 . 5/9/2014