|Reviews for Fifty Shades of Salvatore
| Helsi-b chapter 40 . 8/24/2022
This was good. I enjoyed it. You’re a talented writer. I just feel like the chemistry is lacking gir some reason and I don’t know why. The passion and fluff scenes aren’t as descriptive as I would have hoped given the title. I’m still liking it though. I just wanted to be pulled into their love bubble and I’m not feeling it. I’m not sure if the references to miss Gilbert and Mr Salvatore are helping either as it seems too formal. Anyway I am enjoying it and will read your sequel. I hope you don’t take offence to what I’ve written. I just had to be honest in how I’m feeling with this story. However, it is good and as mentioned, you’re very talented so thank you for sharing. Right onto the sequel now.. !
| Helsi-b chapter 21 . 8/24/2022
I still think the fluff needs more detail. It’s is fifty shades after all. Hopefully the other chapters will go into much more detail. Other than this, so far so good, but the fluff def lacks the more passionate in depth description
| alt231981 chapter 23 . 5/22/2021
BTW I love this story one of my favorites I've read it several times and love it even more each time I do
| alt23198 chapter 23 . 5/22/2021
Hi I don't know if anyone can help me but I'm looking for a damon and elena story it's about them being married she wants a divorce but he tells her he wants a baby first and John is elena's father in this story he wants elena to get pregnant don't know why didn't get that foa in the story because in the middle of reading it my phone shut down and I lost the story and I can't for the life of me remember the name of it can someone out there please help me
| Guest chapter 40 . 7/8/2020
Love this story! I have been glued ...Omg I hope I find the sequel thank you
| SexySalvatore chapter 1 . 1/3/2019
Loved this entire series! Original and gets better as it goes! Damon's dominance is so sexy!
| Guest chapter 40 . 11/7/2018
MG! OPLEASE HAVE THE SQEUL UP!
| Guest chapter 29 . 11/2/2018
OMG! DREAM COME TRYU!
| Delena fan chapter 33 . 12/4/2017
I don't want to hurt you but u r writing relationship between damon and elena is not fair I thought u will write that he is in love with Elena at least ending he has to realise it but u ended differently elena such a girl never leave damon it's not nice ending it's better u to write some chapters and will happy ending
It's my suggestion
It's nice reading about damon and elena
| Delena fan chapter 40 . 12/4/2017
It's nice you worked a lot but I am not happy about the relationship between damon and elena. He deserves much better it's just my thoughts but your writing is fine and good
| dragon.slayer29 chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
| madly hurt chapter 34 . 1/29/2017
There needs to be more sex
| vamphony chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOO MUCH I READ ALL THE TIME PLZ NEVER TAKE THIS DOWN AND KEEP WRITING YOUR AN AMAZING AUTHOR
| CoralPotion chapter 40 . 10/6/2015
That was amazing! Oh my gosh I really enjoyed that! You are such a good writer! Seriously, cross my heart and hope to see PewDiePie- that was the BEST fanfic I have ever, EVER read! Thank you so much!
| lucia chapter 24 . 8/26/2015
uh oh! oops!