|Reviews for Two Halves of a Soul|
| GoHaNViDeLSoN chapter 33 . 5/6
Well you know its kinda refreshing to read the story of Gohan and Videl's budding relationship from the stage of pre-teens.
The Fanfiction archives are flogged with teen or adult Gohan/Videl romance tales. Of course some fics are quite awesome but you don't always enjoy the never-ending loop of ( nervousness - blushing - liking - dates - kissing - love confession - make love - propose - grandchildren ( from Chichi's viewpoint) and so-on ).
You like those for some time, but when you are constantly shoved with fics as such, it gets kinda BOOOOORING .
Well anyway, I think the author has done a great job in developing the character of Gh/Vi in such a way that they act as equals. Enjoying their preteen-hood to the fullest with equal mischief-minds, food-habits, strength, comfort when other is down, and a healthy balnce of unadulterated romance.
So a final gratitude to the author for crafting such a beautiful fanfiction. I really, really loved it.
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/29/2016
I would love to know what happens next. Please update
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/2/2015
The Japanese style text kinda ruins the story.
| Guest chapter 33 . 8/5/2015
You are wery good at this ceep up good work cant wait to see how this continues
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/4/2015
Dont worry it was good chapter
| Guest chapter 33 . 7/31/2015
when are you going to update
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/31/2015
YOU CANT AND CHAN TO EVERY DANG NAME.
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/30/2015
ITS LAUNCH NOT LUNCH
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/30/2015
An average is everything added up then divided by how many of that thing there is. You cant possibly get an averag for one thing. You can get an average by adding all the reviews from all the chapters, dividing it but lets say 35, then THAT'S AN AVERAGE.
| Guest chapter 30 . 6/8/2015
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/7/2015
nice bath scene BUT IT SHOULDNT HAVE ENDED THERE!
| Neo-Devil chapter 25 . 8/9/2014
yamcha walks through the streets, then randomly 50 frying pans in continuous waves hit him in the face.
| StammRoar chapter 31 . 7/30/2014
why is this written in all italics?
| Johan chapter 33 . 6/21/2014
| Imma Gokuu chapter 33 . 12/5/2013
You need to learn to use quotation marks at all times... I nearly stopped reading because of that