|Reviews for Undercover|
| peeceeguy00 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Sequel; please i beg of you
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
SAYS THE ENDING... MAKE UR OWN XD
| TheAmericanGit chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
WAIT! I'm so confused! Did Arthur go with Alfred? Or did he die? DX
| Q3APo chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
the idea is surely interesting. how alfred lead the smuggler and fake the fake identity. its so cool.
the ending, so... what did arthur choose? i'm confused
| Jiyu-Ao chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Damn, how I love this so much! You made my heart squeeze painfully at the end there. Lovely work. Bravo.
| mymanisfictional chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I wish I could properly go on about how interesting I found the way you depicted cross-dressing Alfred, but to be honest, I'm still... just, FEELING that ending. Gah, okay, let me take a shot at a coherent review.
Um, so, cross-dressing Alfred- very interesting. I've never really cared for it, and yet, I found myself sharing the same opinion as Arthur in the fic: never really thinking of it as anything but Alfred. I like that. What started out as two separate personas of sort became just one person in different clothes.
Arthur's torn feelings gave me mixed feelings too of course. I had a bad feeling the entire time about Alfred and I wanted to scream at Arthur to turn him in, question him, see the signs, but at the same time, I adore their little romantic moments.
And that ending... Just. I can't. The desperation and the last lines just... wow.
Overall, great job. Seriously.
| nuclear taste chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
All of a sudden Alfred had a NY accent in my head. Oh man why did I find cross-dressing Alfred so hot? I'm not even into that shit... loved the open ending. I think Arthur would passively let Alfred make the plans for their elopement and just go along with it, deciding that inaction is better than sacrificing his heart over his head, or vise versa. Great story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
I only see comedic value in this! Like, if this were a movie it would be a romantic comedy omfg. Arthur gave me that awkward cop feel which made his interactions with Alfred really funny. it was funny I laughed sorry...
| FluffyAngst333 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
*gasp* wait, noooooo
| Are you kidding me chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Well, overall this was quite a good story. As most people have already said the ending was the best part of the whole thing. If I were to say things I didn't like I'd say that Arthur blushes a bit too much (because real detectives don't have emotions-do they?)
| HeroofTwilight'sgf chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
OH MY GOD! D': That was soooo sadddd! poor Arthur...
| kimikissu07 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Please tell me Arthur accepted Alfred's offer or I'm going to cry because of all these USUK feels.
I love this. T_T
| Trumpet-Geek chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
THE ENDING. IT WAS PERFECT. THIS WHOLE... /explodes
| Alia chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I really life the story. The ending was unexpected but that just made everything more interesting.
I was amazed by the idea me Alfred being a cross dressing criminal. And the fact that Arthur was so guilty of not telling Alfred the truth when Alfred himself said more lies than Arthur, that was remarkable. That really thought me some life lesson.
| Ayumu smile chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
No! What happen? Did Arthur let himself be killed or? Please tell me! I do love this story though, so sweet but the ending?