|Reviews for Harry's Night Off|
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
| wtchcool chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Nice oneshot! I like Bob's negotiation skills. :)
There are a few quibbles I'd like to point out. You wrote "he could run over too, get the books, and the maybe Bob would..." instead of "he could run over to, get the books, and then maybe..." That should be "spirit's advice", not "spirits advice." And it should be "first night off I've had in ages" rather than "first night off I'd had..."
| TheRedPoet chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Ought is more of a British word than an american one.
That aside, I've no complaints for the fic.
It doesn't really add anything to the DF verse, though. I don't quite understand it's purpose. :)