i like this story too. a continuation would be nice but the story itself was very satisfying _

I never thought of Kyon and Kyonko coexisting as twins. But that was good... Though I wonder if that was all there is to this.

Too bad it's considered a complete story. It seems like a more indepth exploration is called for.

Why are such great ideas like this one so rare? I don't think that anybody else would ever come up with this crazy idea. It's a shame you're not up to it, because I would have liked to see Kyon's reaction to the fact that his world has been forever changed. Kyonko may technically be his sister, but as far as he knows she has a totally different personality. I would have liked to see the long-term effects of this. Oh well.

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wow, a very interesting story, its like ho no another kyonko fanfic but this is refreshing and well done, so this goes directly to story alerts, hope you continue this to a master piece because its have the potential, thank and keep the good job

I suffer from too many concepts and too little discipline. I hereby offer this first chapter to any author who will take it and run with it.

Let me just snark that Mr. Tanigawa also seems to have a little problem filling in the "and then what?" puzzle at this moment. ;-)

You have an awesome concept here.

The question is why do you stop at oneshot? It has enough potential for multichapter story.