Life happens - your Torchwood muse will come - I will go and check out Across the Rift

There's no need to apologized , I think we all have
felt this way. At lease I have, I will check out
Across the Rift

I love how you make Ianto like a ninja in this chapter. ;D

This is an amazing story, and the fact that it is set in a different world than torchwood makes it that much better. Plus, Ianto and Jack are beyond adorable. I can't wait until you update!

plz keep going its just getting good i mean i love the way that gwen messing up seems to be drawing ianto and jack closer together its brill and i want to see more

Aww I'm so glad to see that Jack's feelings are not one-sided and I do hope the boys get their act together soon. I'm liking Renee and hope she will be one to put Gwen in her place.

that was brilliant :D

She can't even do a simple task of fetching coffee? Yeah she is not going to last!

I think it was, all-in-all, a pretty good chapter- Jack and Gwen are on the make and being flirty, Ianto and Owen try to stay true to the ones they care about with varying degrees of success but success nonetheless, a new person is introduced, and more coffee is spilt. :)
As long as an OC isn't unbelievable in relation to the story she's in and doesn't dominate the story, even if (s)he will play a big part, I say (s)he's fine with me. Adding a couple of those makes for good background characters.

:D I loved the little fluff in the beginning, Owen being a B.A., and how you potrayed Renee. Seriously dude, great job! Sorry I didn't answer the phone - I was busy playing Zombies at Nerf Club. Keep up the good work and stay awesome! BD8

Glad we had that slight Janto moment. Cant believe Gwen spilt coffee over a second person :) looking forward to next chapter

Oooh, they almost kissed! Which is great but it was only an 'almost'... I hope next time it's an actual kiss. :) And Gwen... dear Mother of God, she's awful. o.O I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

Go Owen! *winks*

This is fun, a somewhat screwball alt verse. Looking forward to the next installment

I almost feel bad for Gwen... Almost. Then I realize it's Gwen and she deserves it so I laugh. It really is a terrible first day of work for her though. Love the almost-kiss! :D Can't wait to learn more about Renee. I love OC's as long as they're well written.