Reviews for let the butterflies cry |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AAAAAAAAA |
![]() ![]() ![]() FUCKING AMAZING. The wording was so elegant I can't even. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had an orgasm the moment I read your fic. Seriously is one of the most beautiful things I have evear read, including books, not only fics. I love the way you manage to make us think about the relationship between Korra and Asami trough their feelings for Mako and the way they can not get rid of them even if they "love" each other. They just cant stop feeling things for Mako, but at the same time they can t stop feeling things about each other. Exquisite. PD: Sorry for my bad english. Still learning |
![]() ![]() ![]() *fans self heavily* lawdy. No but really, that was fantastic. Also, I liked your point about the fluidity of the Avatar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this history :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing and I love the progression of time and alternating point of views. Making is definitely omgoing to have his hands full between the two girls. Their relationship was very believable and sensual. Fantastic job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nicely done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bow Chicka Honk Honk |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably one of the most tasteful threesome(esc) fics I've ever read. Someone should give you a medal, honestly ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is awesome! keep writing this! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh about Mako being there, but I really like the Korrasami. Your writing is amazing too. Great job! |
![]() ![]() more plz |
![]() ![]() i didn't read ur story, but i came up with a poem from the story name! Let the butterflies cry Let them go Let them fly. Watch them drift away from home Watch them burn Watch them die. Hear their tiny flapping wings In the cold In the night. Let the butterflies cry, Let the butterflies cry. i don't like the ending much tho. :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful piece. I love your line about the Avatar switching genders and remembering past lifetimes, falling in love with any person - been waiting for someone to mention that, and you did. xD Also, I find it very rare to stumble across a good threesome piece, but you pulled this off rather nicely. Kudos to you. |