Reviews for The Riddle of Steel: Director's Cut
NemesisZero chapter 3 . 7/10/2014
This amuses me. It's so absurd it just demands to be read.
Awesome chapter 3 . 1/17/2014
Hope you update soon
Sir Knight Silvayne chapter 3 . 9/17/2013
This is a great story in the work! I love how you have portrayed Shinji and everyone else! Oh man, update soon please!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/27/2012
The original felt more like a summary compared to the depth of this story. The characters are all much more fleshed out, and this story is already half the length of the other at just the 4th angel. This version of Kozo is very interesting, I actually would like to see other interpretation sof a Shinji raised by him. A fanficition where he decdies to take it upon himself to raise Shinji would be awesome to read. The Shinji in this is both more fantastic, while at the same time seeming somehow more realistic. This is labeled with Misato as the secondary characters, so i wonder if this is not a Shinki/Rei fic as in the original. I have to say I would like to see that expaned on very much in that case. You were able to capture Rei as girl with a crush, without realizing it, more realistically that most. The hair flipping thing was very nicely done. Seeing that relationship in this story, with the much superior depth wpould be great. Overall, I hope to see this updated, one of the best Evangelion fanfictions around. You have managed to take a good fanficition, and expanbd on it, diverge from it, and make something far superior.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/25/2012
This, is just awesome. Freaking awesome. Keep up the good work! Cheers.
The Sinful chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
I've seen stories where Shinji was as vicious: but in those were without explanation and featured a Shinji completely ignorant to all things modern.

I've seen stories where Shinji was as intelligent: but those were Gary Stus where everything went his way.

I've seen stories where Shinji was as careless about clothing: Actually that was a rather amusing story. Shinji was raised by a porn star and a porn author. Once you've seen your first few hundred naked people as a child, you tend to stop caring as much.

Interesting read so far at any rate.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2012
Anchorborn, Anchorborn, by his honor is sworn to keep bears forever at bay.

Ikarikiin, Ikarikiin, naal ok zin los vahriin wah dein kodaavs mahfoerook asht vaal!

Though I felt that the characters really could've used some more love in terms of interaction, I quite liked this.
DirtNap chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
I have to say that this is much much better than the first riddle of steel, no slight intended it was good but this goes way above and beyond.
Rubel chapter 3 . 8/22/2012
Very cool.
Genericrandom chapter 3 . 8/17/2012
I love this story twice as much as I did after the last chapter, I think.

Lesse... Shinji runs on hate, and Momma knows her little boy needs no help. ...or is too afraid/disgusted/cautious/asleep to help/bother.

Misato's got it bad, but she's fighting it as hard as a lonely, lonely, lonely person can. I either give her three chapters tops, or she's going to make some kind of "mistake" that causes her a sufficient hangup to drag things out.

Asuka's coming early, and something about either that or about how Shinji killed the Angel has Gendou /very/ pleased.

Which actually makes me think/wonder. Fuyutuski and Rokubungi are often portrayed as 80's buddy cops in love with the same (dead) woman. Something about the end of this chapter makes me wonder if they were truly on opposite sides. I suspect that's the case but some instinct or irrational impulse makes me think "it's not quite that simple somehow".

I really can't wait to see what comes next.

Also, you have an 'onto' somewhere in the story that should have been an 'on top' I think, and another missing letter that I forgot the location and nature of.
obliviandragon chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Hahaha when Shinji said protein, I also said protein and drank my whey with milk! Good story here I like your rewrites you put a lot of effort into them and I can appreciate that. I look forward to the next couple of chaps hopefully you can knock them out like you did with the Superman: redux but if I have to wait a bit thats fine too.
Qwertyui chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
The thing I like about this is that you can make it more adult than LCoK. Although I kinda hope you don't make Asuka part of Shinji's harem, it would be to obvious and boring. I am looking foward to Kaji feeling threatened by Misato's attraction to Shinji.
Thanks for the update.
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 3 . 8/15/2012
i like this a lot!
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Having the fusion be more subtle serves this story well.
Justin chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
Thank you so much for updating
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