I think this was my favorite chapter in the story so far.

I really enjoyed this! Finally a time travel fixit that's complete and has a happy ending! I'm hoping I'll find a sequel when I check lol

oh yeah the last few seasons of the Clone Wars hadn't come out yet when this was posted...

Hey, Boba's finally in the end-of-chapter convos! I was wondering if he would come in. Is he going to be in one of the last 9 chapters? Or at least in the epilogue? Please? :D

This was SO sweet! I like the names Kira Nikana and Jinn Revan. I love this story! :D:D:D

I like that Teddy Roosevelt quote from Hondo. Only Teddy's was 'speak softly and carry a big stick.' Hondo's is typically Hondo. :D:D:D

Wait, Obitine? What about Siriwan? Ohh wait, you said one-sided, that means only Satine will want Obitine. Makes me feel much better. :D:D:D

Yay, Siriwan finally admit their feelings! I love it! :D:D:D I still vote for Lonia/Chellia for a girl and Boba for a boy even though it won't make any difference. Reason: Lonia and Chellia are main characters in a fanfic I'm working on, and Boba is by FAR my favorite character, that's why I hate that you killed Jango. :( but I still love this story! :D:D:D

Siriwan! Yay!

Oh wow oh wow oh wow. Obi-Wan MUST have a child! Since the story is finished now that I am reading it, it doesn't make much difference what I vote for, but I vote Lonia or Chellia for a girl or Boba for a boy. Long shot but hey, at least I can pretend I got a say in it. :D

Rex! Rex! Rex!
Also these little convos at the ends of chapters are HILARIOUS! I love it! :D:D:D

YOU KILLED JANGO! I HATE YOU! *screams in fury* *cries tempestuously* But I'll still read the rest. Boba better be in there somewhere!

Palpypie? Voldymuffin? Funny, but weird. Btw, weird is a compliment from me. :D

I just read your profile and OH WOW! I'm a Christian and proud of it too! Unfortunately I don't have a profile and I'm not allowed to make one, so I can't do copy-paste on any of the things in yours, but if I did I TOTALLY would. :D :D :D I like this story btw.
I also speak a little Mando'a if that's helpful. If you need any translations, here's a link I found helpful: coruscant_
It has several languages, though not nearly all of them. Also, did you know Basic English? I didn't.
Btw, I'm almost 13 but I've written nearly 9 chapters (& a prologue!) in a SW fanfic I'm working on on my laptop. :D :D :D I think we'd be very good friends!

This is getting extremely stupid and tedious. Obi-Wan is doing absolutely nothing with his future knowledge. He bitched about wanting to save jedi lives in the arena. When all he would have had to do was take off in his fighter and make a report in space so that the jedi weren't forced into diving into the arena to save him and could have arrived with the armies instead. And for padme falling out of the ship, he could have ordered them to close the door while they were flying, used the force to brace her, changed where he was standing to catch her, or any number of things. Instead he stood there like an idiot and just watched it happen. It is pointless.