I normally don't read time travel stories, but this one looks well-written. Characterizations are good so far. Curious to see how the second chance plays out. Hoping for the best.

good beginning,

Obi-Wan is going to find it somewhat difficult to keep his focus in the 'here and now' rather than the future he came from

hope Qui-Gon shows up again sometime soon

This is a very interesting story and I look forward to more!

I think it would be best to keep this story limited to Obi-Wan's point of view, since, for the most part, we already know what the other characters will be thinking. It's Obi-Wan's thoughts that add new material to the story, so it'd probably be more entertaining to focus on him.

Hi. I just wanna say how much I look forward to be reading the next chapter. I have looked forever for a time-travelling fic where Obi-Wan goes back in time, especially before the Clone Wars and I am intereted in seeing what else you have in stall.