|Reviews for A different ending|
| twinkels chapter 1 . 7/11
Great story but it confused me who shot Bruno and his family was it the Russians that came or the Brits or Amaricans poor Shmuel and Bruno
| Whovian4Life chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Great writing, but didn't I edit this for you? Mine was really depressing! Great Job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
:'( so sad :'( why do they alll diiiiiieeeee! Its well written though - for an assignment. I'm sure you must have gotten a good mark. :D
| FFww2reviewerJC chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Is this when the Russians came? They didn't all shoot them? But did enjoy!
| Very Sincerely Yours chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Well done! How many marks did you get for this again? I know you did better than me, mine was horrible.
Great ending, great writing. You should try a few more oneshots, and maybe something other than that anime of yours?
Yeh, like that's gonna happen...
Congrats, our teacher would be proud.
| Echos of 2008-2009 chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Nice. But why would everyone die? That makes 100% no sense to me. And trust me, I know what I'm talking about.
| the authoress chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
oops sorry about that but thanks anyway!
| Wordsmith.A.K chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
This is a very original interpritation of the book, however, you seem to be missing a few commas. I kinda makes it hard to read?