|Reviews for Ambivalence|
| John Brown chapter 2 . 12/31/2014
Wow, Harry Pottr much?
| izzy5683 chapter 29 . 8/11/2014
I love this story
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/16/2014
love the reference to harry potter
| Laurie chapter 29 . 3/3/2014
Suspence is waiting and will be waiting.
| X.summergrey.X chapter 29 . 3/3/2014
he was so so close to finding her. I wonder who it was that saw sakura on the ground. i'm not sure if it was plant boy or not.
also...ino...I just wasn't expecting that, what happened to her body...
| Ivy Hitsugaya chapter 2 . 2/26/2014
Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, anyone? .e
| Forever-Buckskin chapter 28 . 12/9/2013
Oh noes! Poor Sakura! I'm feeling really bad for her! Zetsu is sooo mean and...scary... Lol I really liked this chapter. Keep up the good work and I hope the next chapter comes out soon... Now I wanna know what happens to sakura... Meanie... Aha.
| X.summergrey.X chapter 28 . 12/9/2013
oh wow. hopefully sakura gets out okay. that somone, like sasuke fines her because he doesnt have to be anywhere on the battlefield. so he can take the time.
| DianASanUri chapter 27 . 12/8/2013
Nice story really nice, I hope everything goes fine and you can solve your personal issues, and i hope I can read the end of this story. I mean please, don't become an evil writer, and leave us waiting for the end
| Calfie chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
"meal passed smoothly"
Are you referring to digestion?
"The movement caused her breasts, tightened in a black bra, to [waggle] a bit."
your wording's probably correct, but I keep thinking of her breasts wagging like a dog's tail
I'm just having a laugh. Yer story's fine and I'm drunk.
| Dramiel chapter 27 . 10/31/2013
Got to chapter 27 finally.
To be honest, I didn't have much pleasure reading it past chapter 13-14. However, due to how much time i spent reading the 1 st part, and how the story captivated me by that breaking point, I thought I needed to bear with it to the end.
I salute you on how descriptive your writing is. Despite some grammar mistakes, it was still easy to read and understand. You put a good use of words and the dialogue between the characters is not cringing to read.
I liked almost every character, sadly except for Sakura and kind of OOC Kakashi.
I don't know whether it is intended or not, but Sakura turned from caring for all of her friends, back to that annoying mouse that runs after Sasuke. However, what troubles is not the fact that she is so affectionate towards him, but the reason why she is that way.
By chapter 27, she pretty much tells everyone, "Alirght, to hell with you, I am leaving with Sasuke! He risked his life for me!". In that case, I struggle to see the logic. Did she consider that Kakashi and Naruto risked less saving and caring about her? Is she really serious? Did she forget what was her plan all about since the beginning? Try to safe Kakashi, Naruto, and village from absolutely any harm?
I know Sasuke told her truth about the massacre, but why does that change her rules, behaviour, and ways towards Kakashi, Tsunade and Naruto? It feels like she turned 180 degrees. And i am pretty sure that the Uchiha clan massacre was not "just for fun", and that reason is kind of ignored...
And after that kinda painful, other-half, SasuSaku part of the story :), I don't really see any reason why she would love Kakashi. You don't really leave the reasons for that. Yes they had sex, so what? Past chapter 12, she shared like infinitely more soul-bonding, intimate, and close moments with Sasuke, than the events prior with Kakashi. They are just dwarfed in comparison. It will kind of break her character development if she chooses Kakashi over Sasuke, considering what they went through together. Yes Kakashi saved her life prior, but she doesn't seem to count that right? :) And Kakashi is kinda getting his ass kicked, in the first seconds of every encounter by anyone lol...
Not very fond of Sakura. In my eyes she is almost degrading past the 1st half of the story, rather than developing. I almost got sick of myself enjoying the last torture scene lol (which was very well done, and I LOVE how you wrote that maniac).
In the end, I feel rather hoping that she won't cause more pain to Kakashi and Naruto with her unreasonable, confusing actions/behaviour, rather than rooting for her relationship with Kakashi. I kind of grew despising her, but I am still very curious at how you will end the story!
And yeah, as you can guess, I am more of an individual who leans towards Sasuke-hatred :D However, I think you gave him a good dialogue, and he is an understandable individual here.
| Dramiel chapter 16 . 10/31/2013
I think by now, it is safe to say that the story turned from KakaSaku, to SasuSaku...
I don't know why all of the sudden.
Chapter 13 kind of wrecked the whole story for me. And Sakura's and Kakashi's actions feel way too unreasonable.
| Dramiel chapter 15 . 10/31/2013
So Sakura healed Sasuke's eyes, and plans to keep doing so, even-though she knows that he he fought and will pretty much keep fighting Kakashi with those eyes? And Naruto too... o_O
| Dramiel chapter 13 . 10/30/2013
Really like your story, it is of a novel quality! I especially like how intense you made this chapter!
However, Sakura defeating Kakashi in 3 seconds? ...
| leafstone chapter 27 . 10/30/2013