|Reviews for Let People Serve Thee|
| yairm210 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
First of all, the name of the story is 'Let People Thee'. and while some shortened chapter names work, this does not.
and the sunlight was still not so common so as to allow her to waste time. - not so UNcommon, perhaps? Otherwise the sentence makes very little sense.
She summoned what defiance remained - what defiance that remained
Long live and prosper!