Because you seem to want to think that humans need magic to not notice abuse, I will share a little funfact from real life. (America, to be precise.)

There was a mother whom had a ton of children, her OWN biological children. Except she hated having children, and she hated them.

She abused them to degrees that SHOULD have sent some of them to the hospital, but she kept them at home.

It all culminated when she forced one of her sons to pour gasoline over a rebellious daughter and then set her on fire.

The neighbors KNEW of her abuse, because she did things like force her teenage kid to run naked down the streets, but they never lifted a finger to help.

Later they claimed to be too scared, but I find that hard to believe as an anonymous tip to the childprotective services would not be traced back to the caller. AND it would have saved those kids.

She was only found out when one of her kids ran away and got arrested for prostitution. And begged DESPERATELY to not be sent back.

Not ONE neighbor lifted a finger to help. NOT ONE.

Harry's situation is far less severe. I doubt magic is the cause of the neighbors doing jack shit about it.

I am not a fan of the whole "born Alpha" myth so many fanfictions seem to like.

There is nothing like it in nature. There is nothing like it in any fantasy stories I have ever read, and certainly not in Harry Potter. And definitely nothing like it in myths and mythology.

Now, if Remus has said POTENTIAL Alpha, that would make MUCH more sense.

Harry is young, he is strong, and in your version he clearly have leadership potential (which is what being an Alpha is all about.)

But he doesn't have a pack with a well defined hirearchy yet, which means he can't really be the leader (the "alpha") of anything yet.

But, that is an opinion, not a guaranteed fact, so I am just pointing it out that such as thing does not exist in the HP Universe.

Ultimately it's your choice as a writer.

That said, the story in itself is actually quote intriguing.

I will read more of this story, definitely.

I really liked the story, the fact that it's abandoned but you're still active in fanfiction hurts a lot, anyway, I think that with voldie you already had enough for your story, the fae... I think it's starting to be too much but if what Rachel says is true and both things are just the tip of the iceberg... I doubt the story would go that far, so if at any point you decide to follow your story (which I highly doubt) just end with what that you have already presented and do not seek to complicate it even more

Excellent chapter! I like Ron. He's not perfect, but nobody is. I like how you are writing his and Harry's characters in this delightful story. The scene in the chamber was intense and satisfying. I also like how you have portrayed Ernie, Luna and Ginny. Great story so far.

it's not a bad story but the constant change in perspective isn't something I like.

Please finish this story, I wait with great anticipation.

This story just keeps getting better and better :)

You can’t end it like that!
It’s so good.
And it’s sad that we will never get a finished story

I’ve enjoyed this fic. Hope you come back to it.

Truly brilliant and unique! Superb job on this story. Haven't managed to stop reading since I came upon it earlier today.

It doesn’t appear that you’re still active, but I’ve been quite impressed by the uniqueness of this story. The mixing of the curses was a great start, but changes in Harry and his situation were great to see spiraling out from that event. I was even more impressed with the reason developed for the bi-polar nature of the treatment of Harry.

The changes to the tournament were a fun read and the humor and joy were quite enthralling.

The changes starting after and change in tone to a more serious plot line we’re well handled, shading slowly into the situation with Ferris and the packs. The introduction of the Unseelie really caught me off guard but the way you’ve been exploring it up to the latest chapter has been fascinating. The last scene with Lea and Luna was quite the thing to end with. So many questions abound about Racheal (Hogwarts personified, or really one of the fake..?) and also about Luna. If the fae have been sealed off, how can Luna be a halfbreed and was it her mother?

While there are typos and the occasional minor error, your writing style is clear and well expressed.

Thank you for writing and sharing. I truly wish there will be more coming someday.

Nytefyre

XD welp, harry messed with them both.

My only real critique thus far is that you named the head of an old pure blood family, Steve. The most in wizard like name out there. The name screams muggle

I AM SO SAD THAT I DO NOT KNOW THE END. SO BEAUTIFUL.

¡Nice job!

This has been a fantastic story so far. I hope someday when your time frees up you are able to get back to writing. Good luck with the masters