It is very rare for me to find somebody who writes in third person omniscient; it is even rarer for that person to do it well. It probably helps that in this story it is mainly done in a way that could be construed as third person limited with a shifting focus, but even so, it is quite impressive. All too many people on this website have trouble being consistent in their writing- shifting between first person and third, or past tense and present, or any number of other things- some even within a single chapter or sentence. It is always fun to find a story that is written competently, particularly one like this that is in a different sort of perspective than most (even, or perhaps particularly, in a rather unobtrusive way).
The added fact that the plot is completely new (I have seen one other story revolving around Harry becoming a werewolf and it having a weird interaction with the horcrux scar, but from there it went in a completely different direction, so I'm not really counting it) makes this story a true gem. I'm not sure whether I would consider it a favorite, but it's definitely got the potential to become one well before it is completed.

Superb story!

I burnt through this in one sitting, and wow what a ride!

Would love to read more when possible.

Going to say Rachel is Luna's mother, sounds plausible. Right? Who cares, it's Luna.

Ah hah! More princess bride references! I totally caught that!

When ollivander said "treasure this wand" my mind immediately went to "marwage. Marwage is what bwings us togeva today. And wove, twue wove, will follow you forevar. tweasure your wove." Princess Bride. Ahh, one of the best references.

I freaked when I saw the first princess bride quote. I fangirled over the second for about a minute. This book is Amazing, and I was hoping to see a princess bride quote, now you need Monty python and the search for the holy grail reference, some musical references, preferrably with Hamilton as one of them, and you are my new favorite author. ;). Keep up with the great work, and I hope to see more references.

First off just the first few chapters basically tell your story and makes me as a reader not want to bother with the rest of it next you set it up so it's one big bad thing after another why the hell would I want to read one big evrything that is bad happenes to me story just no the story may be well written I don't know but the the first few chapters are stupid and in my opinion kill the entire story with a bloody knife

The sentence structure is way too cringy for me.
The plot and idea is good, but then the way you arrange your words is just so bad, I have no words for it.

2014/ 01/ 11/ the-alpha-wolfe-is-an-outdated-myth/

As I said previously, the alpha wolf is now believed to be a myth. Wolves operate on a family system: mate and offspring are your "pack." The whole thing with battling for dominance, alphas and betas, etc. came about because researchers in the 1940s were observing random assortments of wolves dumped together in captivity. This wasn't the natural behavior of wild animals- it was the behavior, essentially, of prison inmates vying for dominance in their cell block.

actually now researchers are saying the whole "alpha" theory of wolf hierarchy is incorrect.

knowledgenutsDOTcom/ 2014/ 01/ 11/ the-alpha-wolfe-is-an-outdated-myth/

awesome story cant wait for new chapters

Wow what a great and original story. I hope you finish it one day!

It's sad that this story has passed away... only hope that the author only has lost his inspiration and is not losing his health. Of course I still have a very little hope that this interesting story will be ended ever...

It's been three years since your last update. I hope you are fine and it's only work pressure keeping you away from writing

It's sad that this story has passed away... only hope that the author only has lost his inspiration and is not losing his health. Of course I still have a very little hope that this story will be ended ever..