Wow this is a cool story. I've been up late stuck reading because I can't put it down, so I apologize that that's the best I've got as a review. But seriously. It's awesome. I love fae stuff and werewolf stuff and thus suddenly went two for one plus has magical technology advancement. It's amazing. I love it. Thank you for sharing. I'm excited to see where it goes next. Luna is great.

Wip's are so sad. This has such potential to be great. Please continue.

Exciting chapter! Really interesting and fascinating take on the werewolf/packs-society! :D Intriguing indeed, and very well written.

Love your Harry! :D And Remus and Sirius, so great to see the Marauders resurrected... :D

Loved this chapter, and the previous one, when Umbridge got what she deserved... so, now the Beast is out of the bag! Cannot wait to see what happens next...

I hope you continue/complete this story one day, it is too good to be left uncompleted.

Where art thy, of Dobby, greatest of the elflords

Just a comment on the authors know and what you said up there well I do see your point if he could have just been an old man and worn down and everything and seeing the Wolves at the door I still feel that he would rather been lifted of Harry and general simply because he refused to tell Harry what was going on and to teach Harry how to protect himself instead of just letting him get caught up in all these scenarios you should have paid better attention in my opinion that's the only way I find that he was manipulative towards Harry but as I already stated I do see your point

Hi!

Really interesting, fun and entertaining story, with a pretty unique concept, love Harry the werewolf/animagus hybrid... he is very charming. Guess Remus got the surprise of his life..., and Sirius is freed :D I am so glad that you decided to expand the story and not leave it as a one-shot, looking forward to read the rest of it! :D

Would be really great if you also have the possiblity to complete it one day :D

Thanks for sharing!

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On one hand, YES! NO MORE CHAPTERS! I CAN GET BACK TO MY LIFE NOW!

On the other hand, nooooooooo, no more chapters... It was good...

I'll guess Luna's mother?

Keep writing~ (if you want to?)

I love this version of dumbledoor! I love that there is a good reason for his actions and why he didn't properly check on Harry. I also find it better than the ones that have dumbledoor as evil because why then would he die? Brilliant version.

It is a shame your muse has not had you finish this story, I find it fascinating where it is going and especially the new twist with Luna being part fae.

Is Racheal the spirit of Hogwarts? And Leanansidhe is the defense professor isn't she? If you return to writing please update this story first.

You could rename this story 'The Law of Unintended Consequences' and it would fit perfectly.

What an amazing revival scene. Dramatic, horrifying, and completely cruel as well.

Oh no, romance troubles?

Good to see that you're making characters more three dimensional.