Reviews for The Christmas Truce and other military disasters |
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![]() ![]() This is WW1, why did you call them Nazis? I made the mistake as well, I'm not blaming you, I just want to let people know that they were not committing massive genocide in WW1. Not with Hitler in power, anyway |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Give us all your desserts and nobody will get hurt!" This, this is the ultimate fail robbery line, haha! I enjoyed this chapter very much. A shame you've such limited computer access (why does your mum allow you 30mins, anyway?) otherwise you could flesh out the scene more. The comedic punches are already there, and it's what kept me going. Bring on the funnies! Other than that, happy hols! Hope you're having a good time :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a gentle reminder: fanfic's getting strict about posting ANs as chapters. You've already posted this on your profile, so I'm sure your readers will understand your absence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nothing like good old Christmas and sheer goodwill to demonstrate the futility of war. Military high commands are the real killjoys here :( anyway, this is a beautifully done scene. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha that actually sounds hilarious! They're in the middle of a bloody war and all they want is different desserts. Those silly Nazis lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting. I like history-based fics. There's so much material to work with. I hope to read more soon ) |