Reviews for Help me
Yuvena chapter 11 . 4/19
Please continue this! The plot is amazing and I HAVE to know what's up with Vegeta's eye and 'Father'. This story is really amazing! You have to continue this!
There aren't even things I can complain about or think they're bad ((and I'm usually good at thinking about some)).
I hope you'll find inspiration soon, cuz I want to read the next chapter;)
DBZFanCraft chapter 2 . 1/22
That ending though (; Since I have no idea what the Ritz Oto's voice sounds like,I just imagined that last part using Nappa's makes sense because of TFS
DBZFanCraft chapter 3 . 9/6/2014
ROFL AND CRYING!Oto is hilarious and this chap. Was kinda sad :) Been a while since I laughed or parents even thought I was going through
Fangirl0045 chapter 11 . 5/3/2014
You said: "Aishiteru"
That's not wrong, but the way two gay males say "love you" is pronounce "sukida".

Glad to see ya back, really! Love it!

P.S. More Otosan!
shequita.chase chapter 11 . 4/23/2014
This is an interesting turn...didn't think he would be plotting something... uh oh on goku and vegeta part...
Guest chapter 10 . 4/10/2014
It was really great ,but what is vegeta hiding in the bandage in his eye
Guest chapter 10 . 8/22/2013
Next?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Oto-san is amazing. Keep writing. in reality, I've already read this, and I really enjoyed the part where they smash furniture. LOL. :)
*goku smashes chair on floor* Woo hoo! this is awesome vegeta!
*vegeta laughing his head off...* HAHAHAHA!
* I come out of nowhere, hit a (glass) table over vegeta's head.*
Goku: what have you done?!
Me: Um... "awkward..."
*vegeta sits up, bleeding* i'm okay!
*goku sighs*
*vegeta and me go back to breaking things*
Goku: No Comprende...
Killingsenserulez chapter 2 . 9/9/2012
Lol. I like Oto-san. _
Great story.
withoutwingsx chapter 10 . 6/16/2012
Ohh is his eye gone?
Ranni-Lou chapter 10 . 6/15/2012
Oh! Goku's beatin up his kids now tsk tsk! Vegetas a badddd influence hehe. Loved it!
WhyTheCagedBirdSings chapter 3 . 6/14/2012
good story
WhyTheCagedBirdSings chapter 6 . 6/12/2012
good story so far
Ranni-Lou chapter 9 . 6/10/2012
Very interesting! I wonder what the humans will think of all this time vegeta and goku spend together? And I can't wait to hear goku explain his strange new appearence...hmmmm...
Ranni-Lou chapter 8 . 6/9/2012
Once again, perfect timing with my morning coffee. Enjoyed fully .
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