Reviews for Help me
shequita.chase chapter 11 . 23h ago
This is an interesting turn...didn't think he would be plotting something... uh oh on goku and vegeta part...
Guest chapter 10 . 4/10
It was really great ,but what is vegeta hiding in the bandage in his eye
Guest chapter 10 . 8/22/2013
Next?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Oto-san is amazing. Keep writing. in reality, I've already read this, and I really enjoyed the part where they smash furniture. LOL. :)
*goku smashes chair on floor* Woo hoo! this is awesome vegeta!
*vegeta laughing his head off...* HAHAHAHA!
* I come out of nowhere, hit a (glass) table over vegeta's head.*
Goku: what have you done?!
Me: Um... "awkward..."
*vegeta sits up, bleeding* i'm okay!
*goku sighs*
*vegeta and me go back to breaking things*
Goku: No Comprende...
Killingsenserulez chapter 2 . 9/9/2012
Lol. I like Oto-san. _
Great story.
Megustamuffins chapter 10 . 6/16/2012
Ohh is his eye gone?
Ranni-Lou chapter 10 . 6/15/2012
Oh! Goku's beatin up his kids now tsk tsk! Vegetas a badddd influence hehe. Loved it!
moonlightnight1 chapter 3 . 6/14/2012
good story
moonlightnight1 chapter 6 . 6/12/2012
good story so far
Ranni-Lou chapter 9 . 6/10/2012
Very interesting! I wonder what the humans will think of all this time vegeta and goku spend together? And I can't wait to hear goku explain his strange new appearence...hmmmm...
Ranni-Lou chapter 8 . 6/9/2012
Once again, perfect timing with my morning coffee. Enjoyed fully .
Ranni-Lou chapter 7 . 6/7/2012
Hehe. And the insanity spreads! I'm startin to think I might be alil crazy...lololol. very good. I wonder who goku will hear in his head? Excitment!
Ranni-Lou chapter 6 . 6/6/2012
Awesome to read right before bed. I have a feeling oto-san is more than just a voice or presence now...hmmm. tearin flesh from peoples necks and what not. creepy.
XxVegeta'sLoverxX chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
is this your first story? Cause if it is it could use more talking and a little bit more detail but it is really good and you need to start separating the sentences some more at about sentence 4 or 5.

But I really loved it keep it up
Ranni-Lou chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
Yay the perfect thing to enjoy with my morning coffee! Thank you!
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