|Reviews for Certainty|
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/17/2013
please continue! I love it so much! :(
| niki-nikster chapter 10 . 11/2/2013
I must say... it is such a huge relief to be back on this forum and have the pleasure of reviewing your story. I am so sorry for the delay but I said I'd review!
Chapter 10 was more conversation than action. But I guess character development has always been more up your alley. It is great to see Norman and Madison teaming up again. And what was that italicized smattering up there? Norman and Anita have a shared ARI past? That sounds like something worth exploring.
I love Matt McGinnis! I think he keeps Norman sane through the worst of it. You can't exactly call them opposites attract since they have a sort of bravery, work ethic and banter that shows an interesting bond. But try to get Matt to Philly already!
I also want Carter and maybe some other Heavy Rain cannon characters to make an appearance in the story. It keeps the connect stronger!
Alyssa's brief scene was what stoked my curiosity the most. Maybe trimmer dialogue could help with the overall pacing next time? Let's see where this bad boy of a fic's headed meanwhile!
| WeCanOnlyDream chapter 6 . 8/18/2013
Since there are not a lot of Madison and Norman's fanfic around, this is one of the best well-worded (if that's a word...). Almost no grammar mistakes and no spelling mistakes. However, the story somehow took a little too long until there are some interactions between Norman and Madison. (Is it just me or is the story is suppose to be very long?) I actually got a little impatient and skip forward a few paragraphs until I see Madison and Normans name together :P I am working my way through these chapters...
| dizzytizzy13 chapter 16 . 8/10/2013
Please keep up the great work!
| Tender Mosquito chapter 16 . 7/19/2013
Wheeee! I love this! Jayden has such a big heart and at the same time he's afraid to let anyone in...unless he's drunk, he, he. I'm really looking forward to what you will do with the case he's on now and with the relationship between him and Madison.
Its so sad to see him struggling through his issues alone, ya know? :)
| Tender Mosquito chapter 12 . 7/6/2013
Great read so far! I'm enjoying the interactions between Jayden and Madison. Excited to read the next chapters.
| Browny Pink chapter 15 . 6/24/2013
Yay! You did manage to get it out today. That's fantastic and just what I needed. I must say, the whole... er, last third or so of the chapter really suprised me. Alcohol. A wonderful excellerent, isn't it? And here I thought I might drown in the UST for a few more chapters yet. I'm giddy that I was wrong... Though Madison backing off like that is rather frustrating. Ah well, I know I just need to be patient.
Excellent work again! I love your story. Keep it up!
| Browny Pink chapter 14 . 6/23/2013
My goodness, but these stories are good! I just kind of re-became interested in Heavy Rain last week and decided to try to find a good story for it. Luckily, I found yours. I must say they're top! Your crime plots are very intriguing, and I'm enjoying how intertwined it all is.
Please, keep up the good work and update when you can!
P.S. I must say it's right peculiar to have my name be in a story, and I jerk everytime I read it.
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/14/2013
Alyssa is free? Wonder where this is going.
Soooo looking forward to Madison and Sgt. Blake's conversation. Keep up the good work, Chrystis!
| Tonnerre chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
Madison and Norman click so damn well.
| Tonnerre chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Wow, this is good so far. Reading on!
| tsimer chapter 12 . 5/28/2013
Oh man! What a great cliffhanger! I love the image of Norman with newsprint on his face. Heh.
I'm still so very intrigued by this mystery! Keep 'em coming.
| DawnRaindrop chapter 12 . 5/21/2013
Lovely chapter you have there (again)!
Okay this is the first review I've posted on here for your stories and I would like to say that I absolutely love this story, as well as Complementary and Probability.
I've been a fan of Heavy Rain since... I have no idea. But I did have any ships till I read Probability. You've portrayed both Norman and Madison brilliantly and realistically. So great job there. :)
Just to clarify though, I found this sentence a little confusing: "Holding up her light, it didn't bring any comfort to her to see Anita on one, herself on the other, and...Norman on the third."
Maybe I missed out a detail or two in the earlier chapters, but how did Madison recognise Anita? I don't believe they've met. :O
Anyway other than that tiny detail, I loved the chapter, the story, everything. The Internet needs more Norman/Madison love. (Heck, there's no portmanteau or idiosyncratic ship name for it yet either.)
Keep up the great work! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter..! :)
| tsimer chapter 10 . 5/11/2013
I'm totally new to this fanfiction site, but I've been lurking and reading all the good Heavy Rain fic I can find. This has me sooo ready for the next chapter!
I love this little mystery you've put together and I can't wait to see how it resolves.
You're also driving me crazy with the relationship between Norman and Madison. Worse than Moonlighting, I tell you.
| darkergrey chapter 10 . 5/6/2013
And here we are again! :-)
I am surprised, but very delighted. And very intrigued by this chapter, as well. The little backflash to the concept of the shadow fit in very well and was splendily described ("splendid - I guess I am watching too much Dr. Who right now). I really like the way you write Jayden. And Madison, by the way. She sure is a tough girl, but nevertheless, realistic enough to fear and doubt. Now, the two of them would make a fine private detectives team, wouldn't they?
I really wonder who is behind all this, but I suppose we won't get an answer too soon, will we? Which, of course, is fine, since it means a lot more beautiful written chapters.