Reviews for Hitman
Dearjonh chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
excellent chapters god I like the idea that makes this story is awesome I love the personality and hard to be interesting as bella alice excellent relationship may transform this please go ahead
Coeur D'Amertume chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
don't be a heartless bitch bella save alice!(love it update soon)
beelotus chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
I really like this story. Bella inner thoughts is truly entertaining on it's own. Great job.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
Another excellent chapter I love it.
Bellalice chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Perfect! Very interesting... Hope to see an update from u soon.
Guerrilla Warfare chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
Well, Aro certainly has created himself a large shield, hasn't he? I like it!

Why exactly is Bella's organization trying to bring Aro down? Do they know about what he did? Is he planning on doing something more? Like, say... Take over ze wurld!

On to other points of interest!

I think Alice left her jacket on purpose, that sneaky devil.

See ya next chapter!
Roonie chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
Still enjoying it...still nervous that you won't finish. :/ I love your portrayal of Bella here. Love that she can be badass without being over the top and snarky. She's dark and edgy and freaking hot...pretty much perfect. Haven't seen TOO much of Alice, yet, but I think you've characterized her very well here too. It's hard to find stories written this good anymore...especially with this pairing. And can I say a HUGE thankyou for NOT making me suffer through annoying inner-dialogs like freaking everyone else seems to? Like people just sit around talking to themselves in their thoughts all the time, right? With two seperate "inner" voices arguing with and even insulting each other! Ugh, sorry...just a pet peeve. And something you obviously don't do. I don't know how else to say it...this is just a freaking gem.
bleach number 1 fan chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
i love it this fic is great all i can say is nooooooo dont let them kill alice bella ! :P and cumon we need to see them kill aro like a ninja with an arow to the knee lol good luck with this im loving it so far
ForgottenPen chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
I'm loving this story haha. i've never read a story with this kind of setting before. It's really good, and i'm loving your quick updates :)
Guerrilla Warfare chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
Bum bum bum baaaaaahhhhh!

I sense a super awesome assassi-fght. Soooo looking forward to that in the coming chapters(might have to wait a bit D:).

Can't wait to see how Alice reacts to waking up in unfamiliar settings right after being attacked. I see some freaking out and attacking Bella with a frying pan in the near future.

See ya then!
Torturedsoul84 chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
And the plot thickens. Love it!
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
Another excellent chapter I love it.
FufuTheFallenAngel chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
she is slowly getting involved with her target. That's messed up.
bleach number 1 fan chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
hmm very interesting i wonder who these other asasins will be and how will this all fall into place lol i could write a huger paragraph of questions lol but insted il just say great work its so mysterious i cant wait to see how things fall into place
pazu1 chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
Damn exiting chapter... you're the best
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