Reviews for The Girl on the shore
enticed reader chapter 3 . 2/17/2013
i have loved every work of yours i have read but there are just too many incomplete stories, i want to know about the happy endings, or sad ones in some cases, please continue with all of your stories
puasluoma chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
Very nice!
Barbie2 chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
Great chapter
yagalinus0420 chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
I think we all are ;) Can't wait to see what happens next! LOVE IT!
sujari6 chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
Hope she remembers soon.
sandy4321 chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
Really enjoying your story! I can't wait to find out Bella's secrets!
Barbie2 chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Great chapter
Barbie2 chapter 2 . 5/13/2012
Great chapter
sujari6 chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
I hope that she doesn't have amnesia.
sandy4321 chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
I really enjoyed the first two chapters!
yagalinus0420 chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
Oh my...can't wait to see what happens next! LOVE IT!
puasluoma chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
:) nice!
Anonfan chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
You write so poetically! I love the depth of imagery you create in your narrative, I look forward to reading more.

One small caveat, I noticed a few miss spellings and a few other minor grammatical errors, perhaps an additional editorial eye could help, other than that I am very intrigued.
TwilightSVU chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
love it can't wait to read more, please, please update more chapters.
yagalinus0420 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
This is gonna be interesting...so far so good...but i need more!