Reviews for Adventures of an Alpha
MarinaNamaste chapter 1 . 6/11
That was really something! Poor Bella's not going to be able to walk right for days. Looking forward to more dominance from our georeous alpha.
DanielaPoulain chapter 3 . 5/27
Oooh god! I just loove it! And I don't usually like fics about Jacob and Bella, but this one was amazing, its a shame that you writed only 3 chapthers :( but I like it anyway! Keep writing you do an excelent job! (Sorry if my english is not the best, I'm from Venezuela)
Col. Rage-Shadow Dragon Leader chapter 3 . 5/13
loved it! always love a good domJake/Bell story!
Kggla chapter 3 . 5/10
OMG this was hot hot hot! I loved it!
Evellin chapter 3 . 4/1
Sigh. This was wonderful. A damn shame it's not longer, but I'm grateful for what is written. This is the Jacob I always see in my head. Dominant. Mature. Powerful. In control. Not surprised in the least, that this fanfic won a couple awards. Absolutely amazing.
Evellin chapter 2 . 4/1
Sweet god I wish this fanfic had more than three chapters. This is... I can't even. Ugh. SO good. Jacob's dominance is so sweet, so delicious. It's perfect. God I wish there was more than three chapters!
Evellin chapter 1 . 4/1
Oh. My. God.

This. This aaaallllllll day. I have been searching for a Bella/Jacob fanfic that truly did justice to Jacob's dominance. This chapter alone did that, and then some. Perfect. Incredible.

So sexy and so well written. Plenty of details, but not overly so, so as not to lose the reader. Smooth, easy to read, and yet very visual.

Amazing. Absolutely superb.
TinaF chapter 3 . 10/1/2015
Michelle chapter 3 . 9/16/2015
please write some more. I love it so far
MorenaGirl chapter 3 . 9/13/2015
Its 2015! Ive read a ton of romance books and your short story kicks dust bunnies in those published book faces. Damn so HOT! The characters were tangible,realistic,matured,and raw. Following..Thank you! :)
rochelleross56 chapter 3 . 8/28/2015
Finally bella journey is over she is home to stay...
rochelleross56 chapter 2 . 8/28/2015
What a long journey...
rochelleross56 chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
Whoa welcome home bella...
Melody-Rose-20 chapter 3 . 8/11/2015
Aww, beautiful!
Melody-Rose-20 chapter 2 . 8/11/2015
Phew, lucky girl.
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