I liked how you made an obscure Kevin Smith reference to a Clerks Animated Series scene in Chapter 11, in reference to how it was hip to make obscure Kevin Smith references back when they were obscure. "Bear is driving," indeed. I checked the reviews, I don't think anyone commented on it being a reference (though I bet some other people noticed it).

Singing ‘Tumbling Down/Komm süßer Tod’ in Ductwork, while pulling people into said ductwork? Are you trying to bring my nightmares about bher/b back?

PS: I wonder if HTML scripting works in reviews.

need book 2

me2 shepard took over the base

Very interesting first chapter my favorite character is already waffles

10 of 10

! Loved this, even though I just started the story. Forgot how much I enjoyed Exalted fight scene cinematography. Delightful mashup/crossover. Also, Shep as Zenith? Would have assumed Dawn as default but by the various allusions seems my initial assumptions were wrong. Either way, love it. Thanks!

This is ridiculously good.

And EVEN MORE BETTER...

It's getting BETTER.

I told myself that if Liars didn't show up in the first chapter, that I was going to not continue. I lost hope, but you brought her in at the last possible minute. It was a pivotal moment for me.

Geth/Old Machine reference to Batman/Owlman is great! I love it.

I loved this so much I came back to read it again. Can I just say how much I love Shepard, Joker, Tali, Wuffles (Legion) and Garrus in this story? Actually pretty much everyone is just awesome in this story.

this is so good.

I like that Legion didn’t get subverted. He is, unquestionably, my favourite character in Mass Effect, and this just made him even more badass in my mind.