Great story, love thse 'me time' of Miss Shepard :)

PS.

There were a few small spelling errors in first part of story mostly.

That tense change in this sentence from earlier ones was kind of jarring for me:

"Nassana blinked, and Jane Shepard was in front of her."

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This is awesome. Please write more.

great story

I swear, when I read the first bit of this story (up to the title card), I thought, 'Oh hell, he's fused her with T!Rei!'

Then of course you show that you didn't actually fuse her with T!Rei, but that doesn't mean the fusion didn't make her more or less equivalent to T!Rei (except for the shapeshifting, and not excepting the sanity issues).

This will be glorious, unless of course your name is Harbinger. :)

This is... glorious :)

Fucking brilliant. More misadventures as Shepard inadvertently causes massive levels of destruction while getting used to her new abilities. Also, underwear shopping.

Absolutely awesome. I can't wait for more.

I find myself scratching my head in amusement at this did will follow this

Okay, first off, this is rediculous in the best kind of way! I love the name Wuffles! This whole chapter kept me chuckling over one thing or another. Can't wait for more!

Okay. There is no way this does not go in a way that is now totally awesome.

Shouldn't this be in the crossover section?

Anyway, besides that, and shepards sudden abuse of thermal clips to assault Legions... I mean Wuffles ears with a sonic attack, I'm currently wondering how this story will be balanced... or will it just be every chapter 'Shepard does something awesome'.

Also wondering if the Grunt meets Monrith story will ever get updated.

Awesome. I will heartily enjoy seeing Shepard explore her new abilities.

Wuffles the Wonder Geth... oh dear God she's a Ree! Hide the explosives, vegetables, and the Stuff!

*cough* Ok now that is out of the way. Wow I have not seen a fic start out that epic before. Ok then Shepard is not dead nor is she a techno-zombie thingy, she was saved by... God? And is, from my readings of Nobody Dies, a Angel. She named Legion, Wuffles, can survive on a world that would kill humans, and is gaining weight in her boobs.

Damn if this is anything like your other fics, this is going to be epic.

Celestia's Paladin

Interesting story, and a good read so far. Is this a crossover with something? If so, could you please mention it somewhere?

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This may just be the single most awesome thing I ever read.