|Reviews for See True|
| tsevca chapter 2 . 1/19
yeah, this chapter confirmed what i thought from the first. maybe next time.
| tsevca chapter 1 . 1/18
last names arent optional. no jon stark, but jon lychester.
bran couldnt see threw the weirwood trees just by himself. he had to eat that thing made of tree, which children of the forest gave him. where would he get it here?
starks wouldnt start a war just for lyanna being taken by rhaegar. they didnt until aerys killed lord stark and his heir. that was the reason.
lord rickard didnt allow lyanna learn to fight. ned allows it to arya, because he sees lyanna in her and still does it secretly, because its very unpropriet. rickard allows it to both of them openly here?
you had good idea but apparently tried to simplify that, which created some bugs in your story. ill try next chapter, but i dont see it as a story for me, because i prefer my asoiaf ff as stories that we didnt see and could happen or stories that could happen if something happened differently (if there wasnt raining so much, robb would cross the river threw the bridge he originally wanted to, he wouldnt waste time going to the second closest bridge, which was at the twins, he wouldnt need walder frey, he wouldnt make a deal with him, so he wouldnt break anything and the red wedding would never happen.). you took authors liberty, which is fine for some readers, but it isnt what i look for.
| Hilary Parker chapter 3 . 4/21/2013
Very nicely done.
| Dreamwalker-Bibliophile chapter 3 . 12/25/2012
This story is amazing! And so adorable, I love Gendry and Arya! Will you please please update it soon?
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/1/2012
Oh this is beautiful I loved every single bit. I hope you write more fics in the prince Gendry universe please!
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/13/2012
This was beautiful. I love the Baratheon children they are so much closer as a family than the Lannisters are. There was a right amount of fluff and I loved it.
| thesimplestterms chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
(Even though there was too much fluff for my taste at some moments) Thank you. THANK YOU for writing this.
I really love Prince!Gendry AU and this was the fanfiction most close to perfection (is that even grammatically correct lol)
| Carolnuts chapter 3 . 7/10/2012
is it over already? no! I want more!
this story is so cute! well done
| elisamangini chapter 3 . 6/15/2012
beauiful FF very well written and pleasant... though such a happy ending it's not remotely desirable in GRRMartin books i enjoied your AU with so much challenging points and conditions to be met... well done
| mad-sugar-but-sweet chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
oh my gosh it was so good
it was perfect!
im so happy
And it was such a struggle to read this last chap lol
I may or may not have been waiting for my phone to tell me I had an email all day yesterday about a new chap
then I finally got it, when I was in the car on the way back to uni
but I couldnt read it on my phone coz my internet server decided it was adult content
then I got to uni and my friends were like lets play hide and seek and disney trivia pursuit
and then finally at 3am last night I got to finish the chapter :):):):):)
and it was soooooooooooo worth omgosh I freaked out all my friends from my squealing haha
and that it was sad longwinded story
sorry for rambling
I thought the chapter was absolutely brill
I love the characterisation of all the characters and the development of the relationship between Gendry and Arya
and even though I still wish it was longer for purely selfish reasons, I think this is absolutely brilliant just the way it is.
Also ive been checking out your other stories and may just have to read a few more :)
great job! and thanks for a great read
| MerlinaDementiaSnow chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
I loved it!
| xxktnxx chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
absolutely LOVED this chapter:)
| GoDrinkPinesol624 chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
Yeah wonderful story I hope you do more with Arya!
| JuhLillith chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
This is beautiful! And perfect!I'll never thank you enough for writing this!
| mad-sugar-but-sweet chapter 2 . 5/13/2012
are there only going to be three chapters?
can there be more?
please please please
I could read about these characters forever
I love your interpretation of them
moooooooore please :) hehe
ooh Arya/Gendry next chapter
IM SO EXCITED!