Reviews for The Principal's Daughter
Nands12 chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
OMG, keep going.. This one is really good!

BDavis.16 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
It's University of California, Berkeley. Or UC Berkeley or just Cal (since its the first of the UC schools). Not University of Berkeley.

Normally I don't leave reviews like this but my first loyalty is to my alma mater! GO BEARS!
Musicslildancer chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Great plot but some of the analogies were a bit strange and killed the mood. You used the word "however" teensy bit too much (maybe try some different transitional phrases/words) But other than that it was good and i hope that with out the limitations of a competition u lengthen and slow down your story. Great talent:) (better than half of the stories i happen upon)
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Real good
Sassyvampmama chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
mystifylove chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Karen Cullen Grey chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Okay to all who read this story here, you can now go to my profile as i have posted it therer in a mutichaptered story! Thanks to those who voted for it!
dreamalittledream83 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Loved this! Can't wait for more of this!

Happy Birthday Bella indeed!
cullenemmett5 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Can't wait to read more! I loved it. Goddd it was good!
Annie Lantus chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Awesome oneshot! ;)
MrsK81 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Loved it! Can't wait for it to be continued :D
T-Licious chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
I am looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story plays out!
PLL lover1992 chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
love it!
RandyWriter chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Wonderful story! Bella is so mature for her age. Love how these two are perfect for one another, despite their age. Love how you described their little cat and mouse game! Loved it!
ArodLoverus2001 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
great story! can't wait for the continuation.
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