Reviews for iAm Yours
Guest chapter 8 . 12/9/2014
PD31, you have updated other stories but not this one. Have you ran out of ideas for this? Do you have writers block? This story needs to have a direction. Here's an idea maybe you write a pregnancy for carly and freddie?
Guest chapter 8 . 3/25/2014
The writer seems to be updating different stories but not this one.
BarkingStarfish chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
I love this story! Can't wait for an update!
Laineysf chapter 8 . 12/28/2012
Good story. Hope you continue it!
WerewolfForever36 chapter 4 . 12/16/2012
OMG, the convo between Spencer and Carly in Chapter 4 is like a story I wrote! Amazing! Loved the story!
Galaxydefender49 chapter 8 . 10/28/2012
omg please update soon i wanna read more of this amazing story xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject87 chapter 8 . 9/12/2012
Great update, keep up the good work
Subject87 chapter 7 . 8/15/2012
Great chapter, cute. Well written as always, Can't wait for the next chapter
aznpikachu215 chapter 7 . 8/10/2012
Seems like this chapter was a little dry, but it's probably just me, keep it up!
Subject87 chapter 6 . 7/12/2012
Great chapter, well written and descriptive. Keep up the good work!
Cameddie chapter 6 . 7/12/2012
This was beautiful!
Vital Info chapter 6 . 7/11/2012
I can't say I didn't love it but I certainly didn't hate it. The light use of bondage was nice but if you're gonna do bondage push the tempo.

I mean lightly spank her, pinch her nipples, bite her thighs, do things that Carly would find shocking given she's been deprived of her senses especially sight making everything feel more than it is. Remember though they are teens (17-ish correct?) this is an M story so you have push the boundaries of what a normal story lemon could be.

You're targeting an older audience like myself who thrive on detail and seeing things we've experienced ourselves like an ex. myself being handcuffed by a former lover and having my member sucked and bitten lightly around the tip to drive me to the edge of you know or would like to experience one day like having a sexual toy inserted in a place never before explored.

You gotta take us on that adventure of the mind we're we men believe its us being Freddie entering Carly and the women being penetrated by Freddie through vivid details. Remembers in lemons are everything and M means the more the better.
SirRay chapter 6 . 7/11/2012
A little light bondage to add some excitement to the relationship. OK, I loved it.

I still miss what Freddie/Rachel could have had.
illusorygentleman chapter 6 . 7/11/2012
Really nice set up and the pacing was very nice as well. The "action" parts are kind of a let down as to the detail, but its only because the buildup/foreplay is exceptional. Great work and I can't wait for more.
Vital Info chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
Very nice lemon, though more detail would've been appreciated such as how Freddie took it upon him to caress Carly's breast; ex. I could not resist taking in my girlfriend's bosom they were as I imagine perfect size, shape and those luscious pink nipples that were begging to be nibbled and sucked fiercely and I did so sending chills of pleasure all throughout Carly's body making her temple even more moist than it already was making crave wanting to enter her radically more so on this unforgettable night.

See the detail, that needs to be there for any future lemon you plan to do.

Also was this Carly's first time? If so talk about her hymen being broken as Freddie entered her would've been good, though my inner most curiosity is was she on the pill? No mention of either wearing protection makes me worry that when they came, it will result in Carly getting pregnant.

Spencer will literally kill Freddie and so will his mom, who I believe wll soon after kill Carly if it indeed leads down that road.

Good story so far though. Looking forward to next chapter.
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