|Reviews for Subtle Connections|
| Winterhalt chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Please continue this. It is wonderful!
| JustLucky05 chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
excellent story! I really enjoyed it.
| teefana chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
if i've ever read magic with words, its in this are no words to describe this kind of talent.
please continue this particular story and complete it, as only you can.
| ponytail chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Your writing style is so different in a very fantastic way. It is really descriptive yet leaves a lot to the reader's imagination. I had to go back and read the other two. This chapter really brings them all together! Here's to hopefully stumbling across another in the future. :)
| banshee1968 chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Thanks, I hope there is more to come
| Uberscribbler chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Fascinating. Subtle. Suggestive. Enticing. Vague and romantic.
And that's just the first six paragraphs.
The story could stand a spellcheck and grammarcheck, and its a bit vague about what happens at the end. That's not necessarily a bad thing as the reader has to engage their imagination to fill in the gaps. Problem is the author's style of exposition and storytelling do a remarkable job of filling in the other gaps, so whatever one imagines Adam ultimately did might not feel 'right' for the story.
That's a somewhat longwinded snowjob way of saying to the author MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
Please? Would abject and desperate begging help any?
| HazzaTL3 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Just read all 3 chapters/ stories, and its a good story you got here.