|Reviews for Death Note Issues|
| TK chapter 3 . 4/22/2014
You've gotten better but little imperfections make it hard to be in there all the way, it doesn't quite have me for the entire run. This could be the choice of words at points or rather the structure of some sentences.
As it is now you write with a slight bit of literal translation from your own tongue it seems. However, this could be your intention in which case you can consider it void.
| Red Lips 'nd Cloudy Eyes chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
She updated... *searching the sky for pigs*
Wow, it's gonna be like Bonnie 'nd Clyde They could be a 'couples who kill' episode on Investigation Channel! You should write a song about this story!
It's so much fun to see how your writing style is maturing alongside with you. It's a great difference since the last time you posted. Good to see you working your muse again :D
nu ik nog... -_-'
We'll babble more about this at Cyn's b-day (just to annoy her...)
See ya later, gorgeous!
| BlackVeilSirens chapter 2 . 5/15/2012
this is amazing i love death note
| Red Lips 'nd Cloudy Eyes chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
Wow, that was quick!
Not drunk anymore... Just for the record. Just in case you're thinking I'm an alcoholic or something. Which I'm not.
Could you drop it?
Anyways, I liked it, dear. Keep up the good work. I'm glad someone in the family can still use her creativity and awesomeness...
We need to meet soon.
| Ravenclaw Alchemist chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Im excited for the next chapter!
| Red Lips 'nd Cloudy Eyes chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Did our meeting inspire you or somethin'?
Way to go, cuz!
writing is gettin' better 'nd better.
and I'm kinda drunk.
love y'all and all that jazz.
I should sleep now...