|Reviews for Lelepau|
| Craftygirl11 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
That was a good one-shot. I really enjoyed it. I just wish the writer's would do something like this on the show. Great story.
| Lidil chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Danny is Steve's 'Thousandth Man'.
| Gwalchmai chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I enjoyed this story very much! It is different from my own tag, but I was surprised more than once how similar we seem to see some things, like Joe, or Steve and Danny's reactions to the Joe-situation and to each other. This is something I really could see happen after the episode, too. I loved that Danny felt concerned and drawn to Steve's house without even knowing why and how he reacted to finding Steve and realizing what state he was in. I also loved Steve wrestling with himself and finally deciding to trust Danny completely (I can't imagine how difficult it must be for Steve by now to trust people). Steve finally breaking down was very realistic and Danny was great in that scene. The ending was perfect and I really love that last paragraph. :)
| francis2 chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Awesome story. Love it!
| susy chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
| miriab chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Such a perfect story! I read it min 3 times by now. They are all in character, and Danny's and Steve's emotions are so true and realistic!
Your writing was emotional and hertbreaking, I like it a lot.
I hope you will write more oneshots :)
| Qweb chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
I like the brother act. Good story.
| Kristen999 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Oh, wow. Steve is all about control so him losing it like this, succumbing to a night o heavy drinking is intense. Danny's panic and tough love was pitch perfect, just as I thought he lacked compassion, he let up on the brakes. Steve's breaking down after so much stress and exhaustion was palatable and I'm glad Danny was there like a rock.
| Gone2Far chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Very well written. Excellent description of someone losing it and reasons for doing so and suffering the consequences.
| Nilah chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Enjoyed this. Skillfully emoted.
| Ilmare-Ilse chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
I really liked your story. I agree that there has to be a point where everything that has happened to Steve catches up with him, and I loved your take on it.
Thank you for sharing!
| lynnrxgal chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
| CinderH chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Awww, I loved it. Very well written. Perfect amount of caring, brotherly love.