Reviews for Love Chain
DBZFanCraft chapter 10 . 5/26/2015
DBZFanCraft chapter 6 . 5/26/2015
Telling Roshi?Hn.I can already imagine all his nose bleeding daydreams *Attempts to stop nose bleed*
DBZFanCraft chapter 5 . 5/26/2015
.-. Me : I do not support Goku and Piccolo,I do not support Goku and Piccolo,I do No-

Retzu : Yes,you do.

Me : o-o Dammit the inner voice always speaks the truth...
DBZFanCraft chapter 4 . 5/26/2015
.-. geez Goku...dark...
DBZFanCraft chapter 3 . 5/26/2015
._. I totally know where this is going.
DBZFanCraft chapter 2 . 5/26/2015
...not much Yaoi was in this chapter was funny at THAT part...well...AT LEAST GOKU WAS THE UKE _ THERE!I SAID IT!I'm AN UKE GOKU SUPPORTER
Guest chapter 6 . 3/19/2015
1 awesome point for Krillin. he's a good guy YA know?
recha2002 chapter 12 . 2/24/2015
Great you shoould write more
The-Blue-Tailed-Alchemist11052 chapter 12 . 8/13/2012
AWsome stoy bro! One of the best!
SnazzehGoku chapter 12 . 7/28/2012
Little-Miss-Scar chapter 12 . 7/28/2012
Super Saiyan Push Attack! xD That was so hilarious that I nearly fell out of my chair! xD This was such a great story, I loved it! xxx
Son Bianca chapter 12 . 7/19/2012
Yo that was so awesome. I thought it was funny, sad, weird, confusing, and nice! I thought it was funny when Goku found out he was prego and that he was just having mood swings a lot and man I'm glad I was not there because I don't think anyone wants to see Goku angry. At the end I thought it was sweet and funny cause Goku is the mom even though he's a guy but still Goku would make a better mom than Vegeta. Loved it and hope you will make more stories but with different people in love! ;);)
Chirusa chapter 12 . 9/20/2003
First off i'd like to oppologize for some of the reviews i gave you. - i seriusly do really like this fic. soo no hard feelins? yup yup... well yea. [wide grinn]
Arch-Nemesis chapter 12 . 8/2/2003
I'm so glad that you finished. Yeah!

That was sweet. I love the end with Sora. If you decide to do a sequel please, please let me know ;-)

Excellent work! Until next time, be safe and take care!

Nemesis _~
Lady AngelFiren chapter 12 . 7/25/2003
aw... great fic! i hate preggy fics, especially where veggie gets pregnant, so you scored my attention by making it goku instead, and overall, you managed to keep me hooked withthe littel details, you know, goku;s bitchiness and such.

As for the other aspects of the fic, it was excellent! Your interactions between characters, as well as most of the personalities were well done.

This ic also had a few drawbacks. Firstly, you really need a beta reader, you have many spelling errors, although it seems that your grammar and sentence structuring is perfectly fine, its only the spelling that needs help.

The other thing i dind;t like abotu the fic was the way goku and vegeta kept getting out oif character and tellingone another all these sweet little things, especially how much they loved one another. Tat was definately unrealistic and not a good thing to add to the fic the way you did.

However, overall it was a good read, and i see plenty of potential for great fiction in you! Please continue writing, I'll be there to read! _
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