Reviews for It's worse than treason
Gabi Da Wabby chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Get revenge on them!
sagelynaive chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
OH POOR GILAN! He's being punished for nothing
Artoria Lyn chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
The ending is so funny! kinda sucks about Gilan though
noaccountgirl chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This was hilarious.
nomnomfox chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
This is hilarious :D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
i am currently biting my finger to stop my laughter. im in the library so i cant make so much noise. this story is hilirious! i cant breath.
lederra chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
At the beginning of the story I thought Gilan a bastard for stealing all of Halt's coffee, after all that is worse than treason but by the end of the story I felt sorry for him. Chuckled when I read that it was Pauline who stole all of Halt's coffee, LOL!
Mychele O'Carrik of Clonmel chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD This is so *gasp* funny! *gasp* My sides hurt from trying not to laugh out loud so my mom won't be worried about my

"Halt. Who... who did this to you? Who deprived you of your coffee?"

The ranger looked deep into Will's eyes, and before he slumped into unconciousness, uttered a single word:


That was epic! And it was Lady Pauline all along...Dun dun DUUUUUN!

Halt's manatical(sp?) glee is just too good. Poor Gil though... Plz write more like this!

God bless, Mychele
SilentMoonbeam chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Haha! i was laughing at the end. poor gilan... i guess ;D
wannafind chapter 1 . 5/13/2012


It is so funny. When i was reading it, i laughed all time. :D
SeekerMaxia chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
That twist at the end was brilliant!
Bralt chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
This could turn into a long story, you could extend each section you know, add more details do a little of this and a little of that and you could have an amazing story:) Great little thing you got here though