|Reviews for Everlasting Winter|
| Kite chapter 48 . 1/21
Two kings... Wow... Yeah no. Not even in the most idealist setting...
I hoped you'd pull something like Loki king of Jotunnheim... But double kings of Asgard... Just no... No...
| Kite chapter 24 . 1/20
Truly disliked thorns magic. If anything it seemed more like betrayal. Trying to cover up the truth of what Loki was.
| 1CharmedPhoenix chapter 51 . 12/23/2013
This was refreshingly original and well-written. Thank you for sharing!
| Fanfic Allergy chapter 51 . 11/30/2013
This was a good story. I enjoyed it a lot and enjoyed watching Loki grow, evolve, devolve, and then regrow again. Thank you for sharing!
| Guest chapter 51 . 11/9/2013
damn 50 chaps you did really great on keeping me in this story its a wonderful read
| Beawr chapter 51 . 10/23/2013
THERE'S GOING TO BE A SEQUEL?! SHYES! Even if not, this story was absolutely amazing. Thanks for writing this!
| Guest chapter 19 . 10/14/2013
| paintmyworlddarkblue chapter 51 . 9/1/2013
Love dit! I read the entire thing in less than a day instead of reading my school stuff. But it was so worth it! It was a great read. I just could not put it down. I love Loki and I really liked the way you wrote him. And I liked that there was a little bit of Loki/Sif and how he carried her for a hundred miles. I only wish he didn't do that thing he did to her; he apologized but still. I also like how you added the Norse mythology into your story. I haven't read a fic with it before and it was really interesting. Loki and Natasha were great together, they really understood one another which was nice. And I loved Loki and Thor's relationship and how they were both made kings. Great job! I really enjoyed reading your story.
| AlisonAPD chapter 31 . 8/22/2013
I really love your writing here: "Though she had no idea now, Natasha would remember this night for the rest of her life. Years from now, she would think about the staccato beat of wind-whipped rain against the window, the dancing shadows giving shape and form to the otherwise plain walls, the soft glow of city light beyond the heavy curtains. She would recall the exact angle that the wingback chair faced the bed, and the deep ochre color of the candlesticks that spilled wax as they burned."
Wonderful, wonderful paragraph.
| AlisonAPD chapter 14 . 8/19/2013
"As Asgard faded, the cosmos erupted into a brilliant explosion of color, of prismatic nebulae, of wild auroras reaching out to welcome him with fingers of tourmaline and emerald light, of galaxies dancing like flames in the dark. The entire universe, overflowing with dark energy and the dust of billions of stars, sang to him: an elegant melody, wordless, like delicately orchestrated chaos. For a moment, he closed his eyes, shutting off every sense but his hearing, letting the music possess him. He laughed out loud. It was like being inside bliss. It occurred to him just then that he may not have fallen to his death after all, and he was surprised to feel relief."
This is very, very beautiful, and must have been a great deal of fun to write. Bravo!
| AlisonAPD chapter 46 . 8/16/2013
""I am Loki," he said coolly, drawing himself up to his fullest height. "Of Asgard." He stared directly into Thanos' eyes. "And I am burdened with glorious purpose.""
| AlisonAPD chapter 32 . 8/16/2013
"I cannot tell you if he will melt if you throw salt on him. I do not know if his heart is in his chest, his stomach, or his left foot. ..."
Love this! Excellent...
| orochimaru's cherry blossom chapter 51 . 8/14/2013
AWESOME STORY! I loved it so much!
| Crimson Eyed Sakura chapter 51 . 8/9/2013
This was awesome. You did a great job retelling the events from Thor and The Avengers - and adding in the extra details - without going word for word. I loved every chapter - even the ones that made me cry. Keep up the awesome work :)
| ThisLooksLikeAJobForMe chapter 51 . 8/6/2013
Oh my god. So I've basically been glued to my phone reading this whenever I can for the last week, and I genuinely loved every second of it. The characterisation was spot on and I literally could not find fault with any of it. You just...aaaahh, I love you. Saskia xxx