Reviews for New Beginnings
Guest chapter 12 . 3/12/2014
i loved the story but fuck you for killing zayn i cried for a solid 5 minutes you are such a bastarde not to be mean but you could of made liams dad die not his fucking almost married husbane
Zora chapter 12 . 8/5/2013
How did he die ?
Ziam Palik chapter 12 . 7/8/2013
You broke my heart.
Im crying, this is the bet Ziam I read, How could you TTnTT
This is going to be stuck in my heart forever
Like there was no wedding, Zayn was killed, and like most stories in where they are sad but thankful of having their love and happy thy are in a better place ... Liam is in pain and sadness
Im crying but the story was beautiful but rushed in the end
Thank You for writing this,I will always remember it. 3
dragon fier 20 chapter 12 . 4/27/2013
Ummm is his complete or what? Cause there is no way u r just leaving the story like that! Omg plz plz plz tell me u ain't leaving the story like that! Plz plz plz update soon if ur not!
Guest chapter 12 . 4/13/2013
Agh so sad
Guest chapter 12 . 3/20/2013
was brill! although, i feel as though killing him off was a bit pointless and didnt add much to the story, sorry xox
Guest chapter 12 . 3/19/2013
I want to jump through the screen and choke you for puttuing this ending...

Thats Like Edward Dying And Bella Just.. OMG IM CRYING TO HARD.. I HATE YOU WITH ALL MY LOVE!
Guest chapter 12 . 2/26/2013
I dont mind that you didnt leave a happy ending what I was vehemently angry about was you left the reader with nothing to think back on not to mention the specifics on how zayn died. You also had no resolution with liam and zayn's dad nor any kind of resolution at all. all in all your ending leaves something to be desired
Andri chapter 12 . 2/11/2013
omg I cried my eyes out ! AMAZING
chloe and derek2 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
AMAZING story verry crappy ending ima pretend that he dident die and they lived happily ever after :)
Im sorry i just felt like you ended it too soon if you can please make a difrent end where they have the wedding and or a child i think he shouldent have died that it was just out of place and not right kinda like when you make milk and cereal and if u eat it all and it was sour milk you throw it up or get food posioning kinda like the last chapter or you can have s good breakfast but anyways i loved the emition and how you exploded the moment on there feeling again great stiry crappy ending and im sorry im one of the people that gave u crap about the ending it just fident feel right :/
kay chapter 12 . 10/29/2012
Why the heck did he die!
Brie chapter 12 . 10/28/2012
REALLY? DA FUQ MANNN :( IT WAS BEAUTIFUL. I DON'T LIKE THE ENDING WAAAHHHHH
jameverimus chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
wut. this is not okay. what the hell.
jameverimus chapter 11 . 10/14/2012
omg. cutest. anniversary. ever.
1Dpassionate chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
This story was amazing, but that was a horrible twist at the end! The story was so happy and then you broke my heart! Don't get me wrong, it was very well written and a very artistic choice. I just thought that since you made the rest of the story so cheerful, the ending should have had Liam and Zayne together and happy!
But besides that, I really loved the story. Very heartwarming. Can't wait to see your next work! But, please try to avoid any heartbreak, ok? ;)
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