|Reviews for Firsts|
| Kanon58 chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
oh wow awesome i mean if only you cleaned your summary i would have check this right away since your summary sounds boring but omg look inside so beautiful!
| crazyemeralddragons chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
I think that this is the first time I've really felt sorry for Sync. The way I look at it is yes, he was born a piece of meat, but he didn't have to stay one. He made that choice. But to be made to kill the one person that showed him kindness... That's just wrong. All in all, this was a really, really good chapter.
| Yue Asuka chapter 5 . 7/5/2012
O-ouch, this chapter make me shiver somehow .;;
but poor little sync, he must kill the person who always comfort him TT
| Yue Asuka chapter 4 . 6/21/2012
cant wait to read the sync and arietta one x3
| Ebony Lee chapter 3 . 6/17/2012
That was amazing. A great idea for a fic, first of all, and now that I've read Dist's chapter, it's just...just...chilling, and well-written, and awesome, and best of all I could actually picture every little detail in my mind as I was reading. The last line was THE BEST. It really sounds like something he would say. Kudos, dear author.
| LastWingedWolfFlying chapter 2 . 5/21/2012
This was good. You wrote all the characters really well :)
| Luckenhaft chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
awesome i'm the first to review your second chapter. usually this doesn't happen. maybe you could do one for the other god generals. i would like to find out how arietta dealt with her first kill. it would explain a few things.
| Luckenhaft chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
what about asch?
| Vesperian-Elemental chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Hmmmm *tense dramatic music*
*Tada* Thumbs up!
| IHaveNoIdea8 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Wow. Just wow. This was amazing. A couple spelling mistakes I noticed, but I loved this.